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The story so far is having a stable and very cool development, I recommend it.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I love this story. The characters are very intriguing and I feel sucked in by the plot. I didn't come here expecting much but it really exceeded all my expectations and now it is one of my favorite stories. At times, the story is disturbing, at times the dark humor makes me chuckle but all in all its very very amazing and I can't wait to read more of it.
just added to my library., when I read a new novel especially an Original one, I usually spend time to read up to 5 chapters only then decide whether to continue or not.. well this novel I got so caught up reading it.it's well written and I like the pace or how the story unfolds, since it's only 26 chaps as of now, all I can say is the author did a great job and this novel has a potential to be a great story.hopefully it continues to update and finish this novel... bcoz most of the Original novel I read so far, either went on hiatus or with no ending..
Its really good.
It is a well-executed FPS and I honestly like the characters. Though it only has 10 chapters, there has been a decent amount of progress. Want more action. Can't wait for more updates. ?
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This book is very good and interesting, the language style is very cool and easy to understand.
This work really impressed me and made me even more excited to read it.
I like the story but for me it's too busy. It would be fine if the mc chose 1 or 2 missions each time or more if they were simple but it gets to the point where it is too much. Once the mc realizes that he needs to get stronger all of the systems require something. I stopped at chapter 45 because I couldn't keep up with the story or see where it was going.
I love Summaries like these but most tend to be Harem. That 'Senior Sister' outdone by her Junior Brother. Sounds cool but harems ruin it for me. If this is just 1 girl I'd love to see this translated!!
I already understood how the story will be from the moment there were 2 chapters about an unnecessary fight...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
ok, look, yes it's a piece of shiii move on the author to dirty reverend insanity's name by making a parody of it and adding cheats to it. BUT...this novel is actually pretty entertaining and not a bad read. Kept me reading all of the 40 chapters and I enjoyed it. I've read all of RI and it doesn't even come close to its quality but not a bad read and do not gatekeep RI just cuz. That's like saying nobody should be able to write a fanfic of naruto. There is no point in it and if something good comes out of it, embrace it. This could also bring more people to go read RI which is a good thing since it's a legendary novel from Gu Zhen Ren. Give it a read before making a judgement.