5antheman
Hey!
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good read so far I am by chapter 3 but this far it's been good the plot is different I love plot twist and this book definitely has potential to expand well done author
Bro keeping going nice work, so don't drop it I will support your work fully.
Really a nice work.
The story is pretty good and the character is also very good.
This story is very fun. Seeing our mc fight the mc of the first world is very fun and the interactions with the system are fun. One thing that does annoy me is the proactiveness of the MC, he often just lets things happen without actively being involved in the plot. I understand why he does this and it also makes sense because it is his first world but I hope that changes as the story goes on and he goes around yoinking a lot more important stuff. That being said, the MC isn't a weak character though some of his actions can be seen as a little cowardly.The story right now is pretty simple and its enjoyable. I don't have any major problems with it, it's not great, its not bad. This story does not deserve a 5 but due to the nature of this platform I gotta give it a 5 otherwise I may as well have killed its parents.
This book was the second novel I ever read online. Beat by 'Tales of Demons and Gods'. In a way, this novel was one of my introductions to the web novel community. I'm beyond happy to find it on this app, and free to boot
can't wait to read more of this one. it is captivating.
A great read so far. Anticipating more!! Just hope that the author won’t start to rush the story and will continue to be detailed and give the story depth. Great so far. Def want more chapters! Keep it up author! I shall be sending my tickets for sure!
Writing reviews isn't my forte, but this novel deserves one. This story had me hooked right from the beginning. Flare has been working for quite some time to bring this novel to us. I feel that creating an element of mystery is paramount for any novel, and Flare excels at that. His writing is top-notch, and he will maintain the stability of his chapter uploads. Both the story and characters have depth. The World Building is one of the best I have seen. I would definitely recommend everyone to read this novel.I would like to end by saying that Flare possesses a quality that every great author should have: the ability to write cliffhangers.
The story was so great and everything was going well until the MC turned into a whole pedo I just couldn’t continue reading it.
Whaaaaaaa. Finally I be able to read it.
Whhaaaa....
Unless you want to read a story full of loopholes with no basic concept and A author that doesn't give a s*** about details and just shove the story up your face which half of it doesn't make sense this is not the story for you I can go on and say all about the stupidity of the design of the game backgrounds the stupid ass quests that makes s*** for sense all the events that happened around the character the leveling system the quest rewards in the crazy s*** that happens around the protagonist when he is level one are you ****ing me this story has been nothing but a waste of my time and yours if you're interested in reading it this is my advice for you take it or leave it (you have been warned)
I hope you don’t drop this book
