One of the best I ever read. Comparable to coiling dragons. Wish the quality would remain the same without fillers in the future. The translation is one of the best and the tone suits the story.
Story is about China numbah one and racism and all
Well one word for this
Trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I love the story look foward to reading it as a start of my day keep it up author
This novel will be my number two. My number one is my Vampire God novel. Please feel free to comment any requests in my chapters. I'll reply to any comments as I see them.
Love ya guys,
Ellendria
This is an opinion based off of a small part of the story, so be sure to at least attempt reading before developing your own opinions;
Honestly, I couldn’t bother with reading more than the first couple chapters, as I lost interest rather quickly. Everything, from characters to plot, seem incredibly bland. It feels flat, and rather lifeless. Maybe it’s just lack of experience writing, or maybe things are lost in translation, regardless this just wasn’t engaging enough to bother reading.
The formatting being a mess was just icing on top of the cake.
I had of fun to read this amazing story the MC is op but that doesn't make the story boring or bad but in my opinion better.
The update quality is really good with at least 1 chapter per day .
The length of the chapters are pretty good and satisfying.
All Main characters are properly developed and are still gaining experience and development.
The writing quality is above what is normal in webnovel With little to no grammatical mistakes
All in all a satisfying experience to read and I'm thrilled to read what happens next
Ps: English is not my main language so sorry for any grammatical mistakes
I love the novel, I could feel my heart beating especially in the fight between Tyusuki and Palkeros. It was fun to read, It's a good novel.
Lol....didn't mind me.
Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
Overall this is a pretty interesting story to read. We have the main character who is indeed the laziest person you will probably meet. He is too lazy to ask extra questions that would probably save him a bit of time, but it wouldnt be much because he is so OP. Maybe that was his strategy all along because he seems to power through situations. Not much has happened so far but the writing is good enough that the story does not feel slow paced or filled with meaningless stuff to me. The side characters are all really interesting and hold their own place in the back of your mind. I hope this series continues and that the shameless author understands quality reviews will come out if you don't threaten the readers.
In commemoration of reaching 10 chapters, here is my final review of this.
It's set up like a personal blog but in novel format.
Read it and interact with the author as if this was a blog and you definitely won't complain about it not being a "novel". It's not even a novel idea but a journal is essentially a blog; just more personal and reflective than others.
The main character of this story could be just about anyone. In this case, it's the author himself.
Through his sharing we readers also come to realize that we are main characters of our own lives. While we may think our lives are boring, they aren't to others.
It's a journal-book style blog written by a high school teenager. Writing quality? As I've mentioned before, and will mention again: It's not meant to be a professional story, grammar and spelling mistakes don't need to be perfect, but the author does his best to deliver and his loyal readers devour it all up.
This is my final review. Thank you.
Great novel.
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*This review is based on the first 5 chapters*
Constructive Criticism:
I suggest that you get an editor, there is many errors in your grammar in chapter(s) 1(-2). I am bad at such myself or I’d help out. Also I can’t see enough of whether this is going to be a good story off the first 5 chaps, I really like to have more story by this point.
Positive Feedback:
Good character build up and a nice story Idea. Keep up the good notes of what you are doing.;,;.
Personal Feedback:
I will continue this at another time to see whether I like this book or not, as I said, the first 5 chaps aren’t enough. However, If why I am keeping this in my library turns out to be true, I will really enjoy this novel, while if not, than I doubt that I will stick around past chapter 20. Now please don’t let what people say (including myself) stop you from finishing what you started.;,;.