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Sure a very nice book
I love this story and honestly wish there were more like it. I like how the MC is good and yet bad all at once, and how he at first he is selfish and only cares about himself but over time he learns to care for others. Honestly there is no real way to do justice for this novel, but it is the best novel there is.
Em. .. OmG look: Tang Zhen dismantled the all-terrain car and transported it all to Building World after traveling between the two worlds a couple of times.
Tang Zhen, who had been busy for a long time, didn’t rest. He squatted in the grass and started to assemble the scattered parts of the all-terrain car.
Half an hour later.
WHAT! ! HALF AN HOUR.
Mind you it's only at chap 27. He has the strength of an adult, YES. HIS spacial space is 1m^2
The author has achieved the dao. He has evolved his head into an unlimited storage space filled with some of the most smelliest human excrement. What humans considered waste the author has managed to fill the skies and seas with it suppressing everyone else.
Very good novel quite enjoyed it. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Novel is quite bland. It is rarely enjoyable.
The primary concern is that the writing quality is quite low. Author constantly pads the word count with completely nonsensical and useless information which has no impact on the story, coupled with repetition. You can have entire chapters that are nothing but fillers. I will give the most "on-the-nose" example (I just copy-pasted, this is really how it was written in the novel):
"Well, my partner has performed some calculations, and he has determined that we will require ten million dollars to mass-produce this rifle. Will the government be willing to add three million dollars?" Poul inquired.
Sherman paused for a moment, carefully considering the offer. "If we provide you with ten million dollars, you will be able to mass-produce this rifle. Is that correct?"
"Yes," Poul replied "we will need ten million dollars to mass-produce this rifle. Is the government willing to add three million dollars?" Poul asked.
Sherman was silent for a moment, pondering the offer. "If we give you ten million dollars, you will be able to mass-produce that rifle. Is that what you are saying?"
Go to Novelcool, the full novel is there, over six thousand chapters.
I think there was a point in time when I was one the first reader of this fanfic when it was being made, I wanted to see this story being continued and completed back then as well as now. So good luck author you my support and best wishes
My first issue is the title which is far from catchy.
Then, secondly, why do you have to explain the physical character at the end of the chapter? I think it's better to integrate it in the narrative.
However, despite all that, the author is quite successful in describing the power of mc's videographic memory. Especially the way he uses it. It's so cool.
And lastly, I hope there will be a lot of interesting intrigue in this story.
The synopsis don't help me to know what this story is, just......cats. Seriously Qidian give us not very good novels to vote and even force us to vote for novels we don't care about by a lack of choices since they don't add new novels in vote system if all novels are not chosen, just give us free spirit stones since the vote system has no meanings...
Sorry for my broken english.
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Another poorly written novel about farming. Seems like there isn't a single decent novel among this week's trial reads. Sad.
