It seems that this author has taken a page from the theory that you need to kill off your characters to make adjustments to the story. If you like game of thrones which I absolutely HATE then you probably will be fine as the writing seems to be good. What we have here is a revenge-fest and the author thought it was a good idea to trigger that with the death of a main love interest as well as a family member.
I personally despise all stories where the author builds up a major attachment for a particular character with the audience and then goes and kills that character for very little reason. There are many ways to change the direction of a story and this is a highly dramatic one but it also alienates a significant portion of the audience. Of course going by how popular game of thrones is I can see why so many authors are taking that approach.
Overall I do not recommend this story to anyone, the reason being from my prospective if you are someone who likes reading about betrayal/tragedy revenge-fests then there is something wrong with you emotionally. I am just glad that I skimmed ahead at chapter 36 when I started thinking that this was going to be one of those stories.
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How is this thing chosen? Seriously. Such bull!
For those that don't enjoy read things that involve man on man action, don't read this. The overall concept of the story is exquisite but the gay stuff was a turn off.
I have read up to chapter 25 so I can't say for the whole novel if it went better. The novel is completed with only 450 chapters. The novel just isn't that interesting enough for me to waste my time to read that much chapters. This is the main problem with this novel. It is tiresome to read which leads to to the audience tired to invest time in reading this novel. There is also the common problem with the dialogues. The medium of the novel is the writing. We can't see how they talk but can only imagine it with how the author writes. Having overreaction and unrealistic dialogues makes the characters in the novel dumber and makes you imagine that they have screw loose. It tried to be comedic but just failed. This won't gather enough readers to make it viable to translate especially with how much chapters it only have.
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the story has a strong grip on its character and clear plot, two strong base to make a good story.characters are fun to be around with. like RIN TIN TIN, i want to see how she further would take the matter. and poor MC hope he gain the power enough to rule. best of luck author
Really good so far. The mc is a very interesting person.The story also is a very interesting concept. I like it. You write in a way that is very interesting.Keep up with the good work
it’s a pretty good novel. my only complaints are 1) it feels like a rip-off from It’s Not Easy to be a Man After Travelling To The Future, 2) the over-exaggeration can be pretty annoying, and 3) the way some things are said or how thoughts are presented feel weird, unrealistic. other than that, it’s a good novel. however, i personally am dropping it because it feels too alike to the novel I mentioned above. to anyone else who hasn’t read it, or doesn’t care about the similarities, as long as you like sci-fi mech stuff, it’ll be an enjoyable read for a while.
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The story is pretty good but what I'm bothered about is his teammates like every time he got a reward, one item will be for his team. Also I don't know why would he help them so much if he could just be a one man army.I'm at chap 92 now, I don't know if I could still read this, he give his sould and sh*t, evolution bead that could probably help him so much, "41%" of his attributes are "back"Damn I'm so frustrated
Great read, story progresses at a steady pace overall. Sometimes it jumps a little forward when needed and goes into great details at others. No major grammar issues and a new twist to an old genre