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A very interesting story. The storyline is very captivating. I am looking forward to more chapters. Good luck to the author, and keep up the good work.
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Hi, I'm not that good with review so I will just what I thing about it.
I really like it, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope it goes well on your side author.
Read every chapter, by far one of my favorite chapters. The ending was abrupt though, Tim's story wasn't wrapped up, neither any of the yellow dragon stuff. didn't get to see any immortal worlds, etc. It felt like the author just wanted to end it when it definitely had at least 500 more chapters of plot left in it. I'm sad to see the end honestly. I love this novel so much
A piece of trash novel with a dumb and stupid mc and even though he was a 60 yr old man before he died in his previous life he thinks like a kid
It irritates me always curses on things short minded mc does not know how to think almost always over react on thing it's just obnoxious for me.
Hello, this is my WPC 254 Overpowered Male Lead Entry Contest. I will try my best to update daily, but no guarantee on that since Life is always unpredictable.
However, I can guarantee that as long as we reach the powerstone goal, then there will definitely be a chapter popping out. Therefore, vote and support this poor author.
In addition, any questions or doubts in your mind regarding this book can ask in this review itself. I will do my best to answer each and every one of them without spoiling much of the story itself.
Thank you and have a nice day!
This is the best in this trial read
This is the best in this trial read
This is the best in this trial read
This is the best in this trial read
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An interesting story with a great start, I've never read anything related to video games so I found it so interesting
and directly jumping from 2021 to 2164 wow
keep going your imagination
I honestly love your novel
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