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There's some people out there giving this 5 star (without even reading) just because they're obsessed with sign-in novels.
There's been at least 1 or 2 sign-in novel in every batch of trial reads for the last 4 months. This is beyond oversaturated. What's worse they're nearly always picked by the editor too. If not a sign-in novel, it's certainly going to be sign-in novel's genetic twin checking-in novel!
As for this novel itself? Heh...I pity the fool who wastes his time on this.
My review on the first 20 chapters:
Translation isn't the worst, but it could do with some improving. The names of realms and such will switch from time to time, but it's bearable.
The story isn't anything new except for the fact that from what we know right now, the mc is living on a floating island that's composed of several clans/villages. Outside of that is the bigger cultivation world which we still have little understanding of. The past 20 chapters haven't really shown anything substantial enough for me to comment further and the mc feels quite bland. Wouldn't be my first choice for this week's trial read but it could have been worse.
I just don't get this book. There are brainless MCs, but of all the MCs I have ever encountered this one is the most self-destructive I have ever encountered.
MC walks a path where resources and Cultivation techniques are provided for practically nothing. He isn't fighting for benefits,he has no need too, but just because he is stubborn he gets into conflict all the time.
Then he goes around poisoning others for no reason or benefit. It is like he is trying to create as many blood feuds as possible.
The MC was destined to be a winner in life but because he can't take a steep back, is needlessly evil and cruel, can't look at his own situation objectively and is courting death needlessly, he is destined to walk a stony path.
Bdw. Side-Characters are cannon fooder and paper thin, world building is illogical and doesn't really make sense in the context of the story.
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I love all the characters author-san! Rena is adorable and Keith is smart and doesn't do stupid things, at least not yet. The cultivation system is unique and I love Keith sucking others huehue.. especially Rena
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Read Omniscient reader's viewpoint .... The author probably took inspiration from there....
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the world was slowly introduced so there's no problem with it. the concept was unique, however, it was cliche at first but when I read it it was something uncommon and well planned. the author really keep up and I liked it how he decided to make the chapter longer
Another novel where a stupid MC that lacks a highly functional brain gets a very OP system to help his rise to power. Nothing new tbh. The guy doesn't even maximize the use of his system and has a very lazy personality since he is completely reliant on his training avatars. The author and this novel is obviously among the many trash and generic chinese novels in this site that's just here to squeeze out some money.
