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This novel is awesome! I like the way the author is writing. I have been already hooked up with the synopsis and the beginning of this novel. The plot is also intriguing and interesting at the same time. I would recommend you to give this novel a try, it is definitely worth it! Good Job, Author.
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A masterpiece I should say, I can't seem to find a novel that is detailed as much as this and realistic too. Hope you continue your work Miss Wounded_Warrior.
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another trash face slapping novel with an enemy who wont die so the mc can face slap him all the time, and it was even an editors picked seriously? is the taste of the editor so low
it's rather baffling, really, the plot was.. especially where his parents gone overseas just to pursue cooking leaving their son and daughter alone, 8/yo and 3/yo respectively, tending to themselves and some debt on top of it..how irresponsible were parents in that world? if you create something like 13 or 15 year old kid, I still can accept it actually..
The trial read is fantastic and the only thing you should know before reading is that its missing the romance tag, not really romance but their is some lovey dovey moments between the mc and his bonded human
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I have read the first few chapters , and I go to say , the storyline is very intresting and the narration is awesome. So far so good. I would request the author to release a prequel to this novel about Valentine's life before death.
The use of swords is common in fantasy books.What about the ax?I'm a Viking person! Beards, muscular arms and axes! I don't drink alcoholic beverages. But in wartime, I get drunk with blood! Men must use an ax! Do not show your weak sword in front of me or you will incur the wrath of my axe!
MC is quite unfeeling and lives trapped in the shadows of his past life. The 20-30 years he lived as a mortal in his last life shaped completely his character and there is no further development with the passing of time.
He only has one goal and that's to live forever while facing no danger, nothing else matters.
MC relationships are unilaterally mantained by the other parties as he never interacts with people unless it's strictly necessary.
All his relationships are based completely on his looks and his cheats, as he only shows himself when the sect is in danger or to discuss the dao once every 100-1000 years.
Btw, for the first 200 chapters, more or less, MC acts like a prostitute or a gold digger.
He waits for the woman (supposed 1stFL) that's obsessed with him but that he doesn't love to bring him resources and then he repays her with s*x. When MC gets stronger and the resources become useless for him their interactions decrease noticeably.
This story needs a physical publication!
I would wholeheartedly preorder a hard cover first edition with a smile on my face.
Then it needs a manga and anime!
