I'm really sad to have to say bye to this novel. I'm not a person who has money to unlock chapters and it saddens me thay I can't continue this amazing story. ??
Well the story seems to be good but the grammar sucks. The most frustrating thing is that most of these errors can be resolved by just a simple review before posting. Hope the author corrects this.
Amazing and best mc on webnovel. Whdjfjshkfjfihekejfkehojudkgjkhdkgnkgnfjgsgkgkekgkgiyegkgkyehkejkfsfjdhsgnfkgekgkgzjgkgihekgkkyefjkyzkktztgjzfj
This absolute POS site. I can not not see my 1-star review that should stand in second place, unless I'm logged in with this account. Any other account hides that. I've looked deeper and as it turns out this mfking site hide 1-star reviews that reach top. fk you webnovel, fk you.
Homestly loved it, the MCU makes his own guns, its fot great description for the combat scenes, and the system isn't outright broken but he is still pretty powerful. Overall, great story and I hope foe its future continuation as a new fan.
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In my opinion, if the translation and updates section were removed, this story would only get a 3.0 rating.
Why?
Well, for starters, although the world background looks well thought out, it isn't that great, in my opinion - at least at the beginning, since we don't know much about the wider scope. All we know is the sect - I mean, come on, at least tell us what's beyond the sect and it's scope of influence at the beginning, so we know what we're dealing with and how much to sympathize with the travel and influence systems of the MC's world.
Next, let's take a look at character design. All I have to say for this is that there's nothing riveting about the character design. Also, I have a hundred different impressions of the MC because of this storytelling.
Speaking of which, the storytelling. I have to say, the plot idea of the author was amazing, but his storytelling was not quite up to mark. He seems to be trying to speed up and breeze through everything, but if you're gonna explain, try and explain everything.
Also, if you read my books and think I'm a hypocrite, you're free to think so - it's because I contracted Author's Disease - the disease where suddenly every book other than yours is more interesting to you, so you read them and don't write yours.
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That's much beyond my expectations. The hype and actions you will feel in the first few chapters will make you want to keep reading. And when you will read the last chapter, you will be left wondering about the story and would wish for more chapters. UPLOAD MORE CHAPTERS! Yes, that was for you author.
this novel is a disappointment. it's on the lower levels of sign in novels. wouldn't bother reading it, absolutely no pace control, depth or thoughts. you might find ten of the same type lying around on webnovel.
where can i find raws anyone ??? can anyone recommend novels like this one. i have read pocket hunting dimension so any other one like this
I was finally getting into the novel till I got to the last chapter. hopefully there are more chapters soon can't wait to read more.........