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At the moment there are too few chapters to give a proper review but it is enough to say a few things.The quality of the writing is quite good, everything is understood at the level that it is easy for the reader to imagine the situation ... although in the future it would not be bad to gradually increase the amount of details in certain situations.The idea of the story can be considered cliché, but for the moment it has not strayed from the path, it can become a jewel, and not necessarily hidden ... but due to the lack of chapters and development of the plot many things can happen.The development of characters, and that of the world, are in the initial stages, a presentation. And in my opinion the background should be as good as those who act in it.I have high expectations, but I have not yet formed a critical opinion on the story.I just hope it doesn't involve NTR or that nasty stuff, you know, some things are just fetishes. I have no problem with the MC being a GOD OF KILLING, in fact it could be part of his essence, but I cannot tolerate some abnormal fetishes as an avid reader. Without offending of course.In the future I will do something more detailed, so I will be looking forward to this not being abandoned. The story has potential, and I hope it is not poorly executed. Thanks!
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I think you could improve a bit by looking at other people's writing and then comparing your weak spots to their strong points. But anyways, please make the mc have a lightning fire quirk, so that endeavour is licking his boots and also that he meets deku and bakugo early on.
Alright, so I guess this is the obligatory norm in this situation? But this is the 10th review. So I shall, ahem...shamelessly give myself 5 stars. As well as offer my own personal critique of my novel. I will avoid spoilers and only give what I think needs to be said.**Take this with a grain of salt as I am a completely new author striving to hone my skills.For starters, as this is made there are slightly over 60 chapters to the serialization. Much of the world has yet to be explored on both front; however, this wasn't the purpose of Volume 1.The background of the game world has been given but the complete state of both the real and game world hasn't. This will serve the purpose of generating flow in the next volume. I will try to intricately formulate scenarios that express the world's state without providing humongous lore dumps.As for character molds, I tried to veer away from the scripted and make their reactions fleshly and oftentimes comical depending on the situations. Characters with backstories, however, will have more distinct personality scenes as showed a few chapters already.Some might think the pacing for the level up and character gains are too swift, BUT, I try to this to the idea of low levels usually passing by quickly as with a real game. However, the novel will be incorporating many different paces to add diversity. So sit tight on that.Moreover, the common tropes found in these novels—I try to develop mine further. For example, the random reincarnation is not so random and instead facilitated by a being. Secondly, the random teacher making the MC OP ties into a deeper purpose; the power creep isn't easily gained.All in all, I've put a fair amount of effort that continuously accumulates into this novel. As a result, I hope you enjoy this novel as much as possible if you do give it a read. Thank you~