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I already love the plot, I hope it gets picked and or voted for.
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I really hope you can say what the story I like the development so far I feel really big potential for the story I hope the next update comes out really soon
Five stars
engineer in a world with magic done right i like the writing and also the toasters im still reading so ill update if neces sary
This story blew up my mind. I never thought of a vampire genre story this way. I hope i can see more of this masterpiece. Keep up the good work.
A tasty blend of many popular flavors, in a crispy delicious shell with the right amount of crunch, but not too much crunch. Too many numbers really overwhelm the palate, and are best carefully managed like the right amount of salt.
Eat your vegetables, boys and girls, Voren certainly does, and he gets big and strong thanks to it!
Author or Translator please fix [Angel/Demon Rankings] it gets confusing as chapters goes on.
If it continues..., well you know it'll drop.
Shameless review from author, well, this is my first book and I know my grammar isn't perfect, but I'll improve as we go forward. If you find any inconsistencies or any grammar errors, comment them, I'll fix them ASAP. I'll try for seven chapters per week
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The writing is really good, the style is in 1st person...the story is really interesting with unique characters with unique personality....i like hit,,,i recommend others reading it.
The first novel on the webnovel site that I'm reading aside from the fact that the story is pretty slow going everything is fine.............
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