This seen to be a pure face slap novel, gods, insta drop.
See you in next week guys.
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great book. and believe me this novel is just getting better and better. so don't let yourself stop at some 10 or 20 chp. good stuff begins afterwards. mc is growing and changing.
I say try later chp, in case you think you are gonna drop. maybe that will stop you
I don't think there are enough boy love stories on this site. So I'm adding one! I like the story, maybe you will too. This is bl, MxM, danmei, slash so be warned. I don't plan on explicit *** scenes though. But the guys date and kiss and what not. If you don't like that please don't read. Thanks!
Good novel with great character development and world building. I will say so far is decent reading. the power system is kinda remind me of hunterxhunter? but a bit close to chakra. Keep up the good work.
the story is entertaining and you can see the effort of the author, plus you can also see that he wants to promote his culture, but in my opinion, doing this practically shot himself in the foot, greatly reducing the audience, since there are many words that are practically the movement of his martial art and weapons, ranks, that the author puts them with names that as readers we are not used to, since practically when reading several novels, one forgets what that name and movement represented (did I understand myself here?) , and it's annoying.
Also, the "MC" wasn't an MMA fighter? Because he practically only uses the martial art of his hometown? Can't he use others as well or try to combine them all like some manga characters do, becoming stronger like that? like garou from one punch man, some characters from kengan asura, and baki from baki.
Also, the cultivation system of the mc and possibly the orc race is interesting, but I think it just unnecessarily complicates things when they can easily have a simpler cultivation system like most cultivation novels or Japanese magic novels, and As far as it goes, there is not much development of the mc's story, the creation of the world is good, but very, very slow.
I will leave the novel here, it is good, but it bothers too much the names that the author of his culture uses, since one forgets their meanings, and I think that happens to most readers, and they end up abandoning it and only a few read it. read, or maybe it's just me, and that's why I think the author practically shot himself in the foot, although that part could be fixed with editing, using more general names that are understood by most, and in parentheses the author puts as he calls him originally, I think that with that he could have more readers, and the orc farming system, although interesting, is very complicated in my opinion, and could be simpler.
martial arts were born out of the need of the weak to defend themselves from the strong, in itself the martial arts are to protect you.
Thank you for your attention.
i want to ask there will be no NTR toward MC right?
Good story and nice concept. Not like those others with full of nonsense
"Realistic Naruto" huh ?
When I read this title, Dream To Immortality(A Naruto Fanfic) came to my mind, it was a really realistic series which involved serious manipulation and mind-rape.
I hoped I could have the same feeling here, it just isn't the same.
Thank you author for you hard working keep it up we all reader's are with you
The story is also good so don't drop it midway
The crowd is so gullible. It’s almost as though the author isn’t even trying to make them resemble regular human beings that are capable of independent thought. The average scenario I’ve read so far seemed to flow like this:
“He’s so shameful, hehe haha.” -Villain 1
“Omg, so shameful. Look at him, haha.” -Crowd
“Nah.” -MC
“Ah~ Let’s have a baby!!” -Crowd
Very good novel, didn't realize how good it was until 100 chaps into the raws.
The system rewards the mc differently depending on the choices he makes, and he uses this to gauge the danger of each choice. He chooses the easiest because from experience he knows the others are way to hard to complete.
You might think that the choices are made up by the author to force some situations but to my surprise, everything ties together, the story is well written and the reasons for each choice made clear, and it is satisfying realizing a certain obscure choice made many chapters back influenced the outcome.
I would certainly recommend giving this a try, unless you dislike an mc who doesn't flirt with every girl he meets or acts arrogant and always gets saved by plot armor (small spoiler there will be side characters like that in the future)
Tags: op mc; omnipotent; little romance; hiding abilities; disciples
how about giving zero the ability to change this gears and make issei bit more serious with training and how about bringing some characters from fate universe like archer,saber and Gilgamesh