This story is actively irritating. The writing is decent, but the author seems to have forgotten that secondary characters can and should have emotions other than adoration towards the mc. While I tend to find harems annoying in general I wouldn't rate a book down for it's choice in genre. But... harems can be a compelling way to tell a lot e story complicated by the number of competitors and complications in a relationship. this doesn't do that. characters are flat and seem to be introduced in their final state with just about zero development. I've only made it to ch 18 so maybe it gets better, however I'm dropping it here as I feel the flaws here are with the foundation, and not the overall story itself. it just feels like the author is feeling up his MC and it makes me uncomfortable.
Before I read any of it, the eyes on the cover look like Sasuke's Mangekyo Sharingan!(Not the eternal one)
Go watch "Naruto" and "Naruto Shippuden"! Great anime!
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Naruto can't do Clones, tho can do Shadow Clones at master level!(LOL)
Naruto gets stonger than Sasuke!
Sasuke will go to Orochimaru!
Garra will become Kazekage!
The masked member of Akatsuki in not Uchiha Madara, BUT Uchiha Obito!
Neji will die!
Kakashi will lose his sharingan!
In the end Sasuke won't get imprisoned!
Instead of imprisonment, Orochimaru gets "Home arrest"!
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Okay first of all, I love how the story is going and I’m really interested in finding out How the story will be.
A little tip from me, you should elaborate more on the characters and their feelings. but that’s just a suggestion
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hi there readers im the author of this book i took reference of Chinese novel and trying to write my first novel so pls support
if you have any suggestion leave it on the comments and i will try to change it
And im here to say for every 3 comments from different people one chapter will be released today as this is my first day. This today special so do not miss it for tomorrow this may remain or may not be so just spent a min of your time to comment and promote my novel thank you
Hello! I haven't finished reading this book yet so I can't really say anything about how good it is but as for now I'm really liking this idea hope you don't drop this
I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.
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I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.
I'm starting to read it now, but due to the comments, I'm looking forward to it.
This story has good world-building and amazing plot! I would totally recommend it to anyone who likes fiction and cultivation! Thank you author for such an astounding story!
I love how dramatic the prologue is! It makes you shoot questions like 'what's happening? and such. I like it because it's unique and u really did an excellent way to describe, so I totally dig ur writing. The main character really makes me curious about him. I've always liked sci-fi so consider me hooked to this! :D
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love the novel, it's fun to readalso probably one of the best idol/vtuber novel I've read on webnovel, though probably because there isn't any vtuber/idol novel that is still continuing, but even if there was a lot of vtuber/idol novel, I could still confidently said that this is one of the best novel I've readFYI webnovel tend to be... difficult sometimes and delete the draft chapter or the already published chapter... so just be ready to have some backup if that do happen again