A good story, that *actually* feels like a proper novel. The system also isn't randomly provided for no reason, but is something the original owner of the body already had, through a family heirloom (likely the product of an evil god). The world background is interesting, with a 'church' that is fundamentally anti-theist. It's also not the kind of novel where all the women are thirsting for the MC (particularly because he's 10 right now) - the playboy is his mentor. The constant refrain of 'little boy' is a bit annoying though - you couldn't translate that differently? Anyway, so far it's solid, definitely better than most novels posted on this site. Hope it gets picked.
something tells me this is going to be epic, yo author when are releasing this awesome novel? please I really honestly want to read this cause it's eating me up
Its okay. the mc and the hype the author is trying to convey is the worst part of this webnovel. cool cheat idea tho! So basically if you want to waste time this is perfect for you!
It's really interesting, it's a good work, author's continued your work............................................... ...............................................
author, will you be elaborating on alex's life back on earth? i think that the betrayal of his bestfriend back on earth was not developed enough. (only mentioned here and there) hence, us readers could not really feel much about the reason he became the way he is. it would be nice if that part was spared a couple of chapters to explore so that you could give alex character depth just a little.
ClichéTitle should be "I have the memories of an Alchemy Emperor in my head"The reason being, he doesn't have the guy in his head, only his memories.I was hoping for some funny interactions that make him look schizophrenic.AnywaysFatty Bestfriend - CheckLittle Sister - CheckLittle Sister is really talented but has some disease thing - CheckMC is trash - CheckMC is poor - CheckMC gets cheat - CheckThe cliché's all align just as foretold by the last 100 novels I've read. The only difference being that the novel takes place on earth, after some sword power killed most of the population, with the majority of the survivors being Chinese, shock.MC touched a painting and gained and old mans memories. MC was trash (or average) and is suddenly becoming stronger kind of fast. He immediately shows off in his next class by talking about thing that nobody in the world has seen before, and is currently in research like some professional, of course this all comes from his memories. New thing is that there's tech, referring Qi and shit to bioenergy. Wondering where this will lead too.So far I've seen most of this crap before, most of the other reviews here are just emoji spam or irrelevant guessing. MC Shows off stupidly - Check
This book is awesome the mc teren is a Psychopath andis havIng character development witch is difficult to do without it making sense hes is one anf furthere more he is op but not to the points hes god yet for noe
The backround story isn´t bad I hope later it answered why the MC was able to get back in time. And the MC is likeable but I wonder why when his family is so much worth to him why he doesn´t talk to his sister.
Bad points are :
- The author makes the MC with quest rewards so OP but then scale the opponent in his level range up so that the MC has to take effort to kill them. He totally forgot what this would mean if other players would to fight against such opponents.
- You could forget at minimum one digit in all stats, hp etc.
-To often are the stats of the MC postet and the fights mostly are damage report.
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The granmer is above the average in webnovel.
The updates are consistent.
You charecter needs a lot of work. The charecter acts like a 13 Year old boy. who’s second chance at life did’t tought him anything. The charecter made referances of Mc systems but doesn’t understand why his system has a quirky personality.
World building is big part of the story, so, far the setting of your story remains vague. Please go more in detail to understan The circumstances your charecter is under base on the locations he is. and please read a business book. Your charecter setting is a business, your buSiness Sense sucks, honestly.
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Such a good read. Can't wait for the next chapter of the book. I am sure the next chapter is going to great. The author has a way with words, which I really like.