Ahh soo excited finally a good updated football novel im loving every bit of it
It's a great story, this Meralman has done a great job
Overall it’s a very interesting novel I’m certainly going to recommend everyone to read.
WQ 5/5 - I haven’t seen any grammar errors and everything is easy to read without any problems.
US 4/5 - 3 chapters per week is quite a good number also chapters isn’t small.
SD 5/5 - I’m only at chapter 18 so can’t say much about it but so far everything was interesting.
CD 5/5 - Big thanks to author for adding the pictures of important characters. Also I think it will be a good idea to make auxiliary chapter for this.
WB 5/5 - So far the world looks quite interesting, a good mix of fantasy with cultivation. Also the pictures of cities, castle and other staff greatly helps with immersion.
Author stop trying to add the need to be ethical in the MC's personality, we're not children,we understand that humans are selfish and are driven by ambition,cause at this point it's almost as tho you try label everyone the MC goes up against as 'evil',no is evil,people just have conflicting interests,other than this there's not much to complain about,keep up the good work
Slenderman is a real human he killed himself beacuse of her daughter a d wife prending being dead real name of Slenderman is Simon
Pls could you learn fo update yournovels in time it motivates people or readers to read
This is my first fanfic. I am writing this for fun. Hope you all like it. And I will try by best to update more frequently. And give a review or tips to better this story.
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I mean while being a monk is going to be a creative setting, I would prefer it if it was a more action packed novel, I don't object to this alot, but it's just not my style
Though if the story is really good I'll up my vote/comment
I just hope it's not slow paced
I really like the writing . It makes me not want to stop reading and it just keeps pulling me in . This is really amazing !
I’d say that this book is excellently written. The storyline is flowing really well, and the characters feel alive.
So keep up the good work author !
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