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The protagonist is a boy for the ones who were confused on the synopsis.
The story is also good so far, hoping to see more updates.
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This is one of those feel-good kinds of stories, and indeed it feels good for the fun of it. A character centred around destruction is pretty entertaining to visualise, after all. The writing in and of itself is good, as there is not much to criticize in terms of grammar and spelling, but alas the earlier chapters have a few pacing mishaps. The storytelling works for those who like simple OP characters who fit their titles of grandeur.
A new reader here, recommended by my friend. Like the concept of universe. Always enchanted by mystery. Can't wait for the new chapters!!! We need more books like this.
Wonderful novel! skhfjdgfdjgdgdhfskhfjdgfdjlgjh I'm obsessed. XD Hye Su seems fishy. I wonder what she's up to. 0-0 Looking forward to more!
Even it's_ just_ one_ chapter but I think it would be exciting and interesting
okay... first off I like the summary, it hocked me up... I mean it so good.... and then the characters and the plot.... can't wait for the next chapter :) :) :)
A ripoff of the original. NOT ONLY A RIP OF BUT A DIRECT COPY. WORD FOR WORD. Try writing original stories instead of copying others. -_-
Another of DMC's hit books! I feel like my heart and soul is stolen!
Story Quality ✓
Characters ✓
World Building ✓
OP MC ✓
Updating Stability ✓
Story Development ✓
(Hmm, I think this one's as good as TGOPC... Maybe even better. Heh heh)
The first chapter was enough to hook me. The plotline, writing style, and characterization were great. I like the voice that the characters emit.
I think it could be better if some paragraphs were to be divided since it was too long and the main idea was different from the other part. That was just my concern, but overall it was a really great story.
I love reading about Demensions and other world genre. I am liking Steve so far but i would like to know more about him. Your writing style is also very amazing. So keep it up.
This is a MUST READ! The plot is so good. The character development is not cliche. They have strengths as well as weaknesses which makes it a little bit more realistic. Oh! And I love how Hua'er is treasured by Lou and her family. I can't wait for LQX to fall for her