poor writing but interesting plot
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This is review after 167 chapters...
I think I've written pretty good story considering it was my first time.
I have read this book till 91st chapter and I have only one word for this book "Awesome" . Nowadays there are few books which are as near perfect as this one . Only downside is that it's so good that I cannot have enough of the chapters ,and after reading every new one I keep craving for more so I hope the author can upload more chapters if possible. Hope this helps new readers if they are interested that is.
The plot was refreshing as the concept is kind of new. Many opportunities to explore. The story does have potential. Character design is also okay.The only downside I found is that there very noticeable grammatical and writing errors. Not the worse I've seen but still a sore thumb. Overall with editing and proofreading this can immensely improved. Consider getting help in editing or try using tools and software on this area.
The synopsis sounded good but the FL does not act like anyone who’s been kidnapped and married off against her will. There are no true attempts at escape, struggle or even resistance which would make her more credible. Instead all she does is think about how good looking her kidnapper/captor is, although none of his actions indicate sincerity at this point. I get love stories starting from Stockholm syndrome on WN, but this FL isn’t acting like a princess who was taken against her wishes and made a forced bride. Or even a regular woman who’s been kidnapped.Still have hopes for the magic parts of the story though! But her reactions make the impending romance seem really insincere/contrived
You came back? hahahaha I thought you would rewrite the novel, hahaha. It's better this way congrats hahaha we're here to support you! Go! Go!
Overall I'll say it's a really good book, top notch characters, uhhhhh, not so shabby character design, and piece of the art world building,dan howbeit quite similar to most protagonist is one of the few main characters that actually seeks vengeance but doesn't let go of basic morality, illara isn't a pushover and actually stands out unlike most female leads, and sai isn't the dumn jock boyfriend, all in all I think it's a great story.
Good novel to spend time hurts that the translator does not meet its release time.....
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255 chapter review
tldr: Good comedy but butcher by side character Su Changyu full of cringe and tasteless joke and poor execution of misunderstanding type of joke.
Ever seen a good comedy book? Problem with being a comedy genre is that it takes skill to wring to cover hundred of chapter. The author do in fact have the skill by making the mc misunderstanding funnier, like Saitama. Problem is, author have the bad taste of putting side character in the same spot. The side character misunderstanding bring people to annoying phase, its not even funny and cringe. With copy and paste word of he just stand there, menancingly and all the daoist scare shitless. 1-2 chapter is ok, but when u even go to the extreme and have dozen of chapter dedicated to him, and still act the cringe way? That drop the quality for me. Also, the author keep repeating how he is more handsome than anyone, like i get it, u are handsome than mc, but stop saying that word every time u appear on the chapter.
The side character also have the most fkin plot armor i ever seen, Even Yun Che have to salute him and call him as Father or senior brother. He is given fruit that can skip his cultivation by 500 year worth of training, and suddenly he become perfect with perfect cultivation when back then he stuck qi phase at late 20 age. The world background is average at best. The fruit alone is just a fkin plot device.
Not much to say here it is a great novel with good prospects in future development and a good theme. I would write more about why this novel is good and whatnot but that is too long.
JUST READ IT!
Even if it is just the 39 free chapters, it will allow you to understand the story and see where it is developing and hopefully you will like it.
Hope it gets selected.
When a group of tourists visited a crocodile farm, the owner of the place launched a bold proposal; - Whoever dares to jump, swim to the coast and survive, I'll give you $ 1 million.
No one dared to move, suddenly, a man jumped into the water and desperately swam to the shore while being chased by all the crocodiles.
With enormous luck came, taking everyone's admiration at the scene, then the owner announced; - We have a brave winner.
After collecting his reward, the couple returned to the hotel, upon arrival, the manager told him; he was very brave to jump, then the man said;
- I didn't jump, someone pushed me!
His wife smiled ...
Moral: " Behind every successful man, there's a woman who pushes him.
Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.