yeah immature but author have long way to go
Simply amazing. Give it a shot and you won't regret it. It’s a very good book at pulling you in. The story, world, and characters are extremely interesting so far and have a lot of potential.
Keep it up Author !!!
guess I'm giving this 5 stars,..........
Instead of progressing the story, author is showing his writing skills by explaing every single event usi g 2 chapters, MC sneeze and 2 chapters gone, MC sh** and 3 chapters gone,MC wipes his a** 2 more chapters gone.... end of your week!
i mean its readable so the translator is doing a decent job, but the only word to summerise this novel would be "Why?" dont get me wrong there are good novels that are about playing games there is even one about playing a computer game on a screen but atleast they are about some sorta super advanced new game and not ****tyass pubg...
This story is absolutely great, do you want great dialogues ? Check
Great characters? Check
You want a lively world and great world building? Check too
For anyone reading this, read it, it is one of the best beginnings to a novel !!!
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hmmm... kinda plain if i were to compare it to debut or die. there is nothing in particular that excites me. the story has a very serious intonation, and there is little to no conflict. if i were to summarise the first 30 ch, it'd be "he woke up from coma, went to an audition, got rejected but......" exactly that, but with many more sentences in between. in debut or die, there are paragraphs that you just simply cannot forget, like sometimes you'd feel like reading that particular part again. this one doesn't have that charm.
Really like the story some bad grammar but it's fine. Needs to continue with the story. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp. Exp.
What I love about this novel is the interaction between MC and Heaven, unlike other fantasy novels were MC is trying to kill Heaven for reason unknown
This is really not good. At the time of this review I'm only on chapter 12 but it's pretty meh so far. Also the grammar is bad and the pronouns change randomly, almost like reading a Chinese mtl, making it hard to tell what's happening to whom.
This is a good read
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