Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
A Goddess kills a random gay off and then forces him into reincarnating in an unknown world, while also turning him into a girl?
hehehe sounds like fun....
If one couldn't guess: I really like this story.
Hello, I'm a fan of the writer. <3 <3 I'm excited how the story develops, especially, the characters. The funny parts I like as well. I hope nothing tragic happens to the main characters.
Solid character solid world love the conversation and interactions. The mc is like able and funny and stays to his own business I love it. Only complaint is there not enough chapters!! Please release more!!
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Great book for now, the updates are unstable but the content is amazing....................................
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Good writing. Minor grammar mistakes, unnoticeable.
The flow of the story is smooth.
Solid world building so far. Slow yet not too slow.
Promising story, and the author is proactive.
Try it, maybe this is your cup of tea.
brilliant, incredible, amazing, show stopping, spectacular, never the same, totally unique, completely not ever been done before, unafraid to reference or not reference
Boring. So far very meh average copy-pasta of The Legendary Mechanic in very similar setting. You better go read Long Live The Emperor! - we finally have a solid imperial & monk novel.
This book is very good. It is mislabeled as Eastern Fantasy, when it is infact Magical Realism and Horror. A very interesting read so far. La la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la ?
How can so many writing mistakes be made in just one sentence... I feel like I will find out if I keep reading, which I will not. Why the hell are the random capitalizations and some sentences don't start with one? I don't care about the story quality because my attention is taken by the writing mistakes.
Better than most.....hopefully the relation ship of the ML and FL will get better, not in a romantic way, but in a cooperative and friendly way.They should be less ass holes to each other, a rough and relatively realistic relationship.