Good.
Nice workInclude more action with more details Also add more dialogues ....it's fun that way...and Plz update more often.Can u add a character glossary too it's hard to remember all previous characters
Hi! Author here leaving an honest review.I want to improve my writing because I knew this is mediocre and I want to make it better.I use too much exposition and find that I can’t write good conversations. there will probably be a lot of inconsistencies because as much as I try to note down all of the information that I use (seriously I have like 16 pages of notes for like the first 30-40 chapters) I will inevitably forget something.Pls give your suggestions on how I should improve, I take criticism well so do your worst.(P.S I will write a chapter ever 1-2 weeks and I should have around 2k words per chapter, no promises to either of those though *teehee*)
It's a good novel, but surely that stupid idiot manager will not pick this cuz he is a douche. If this one ain't picked, curse be thy ancestors.
Thanks author for this masterpiece which also happens to be free keep up the good work
story is cliche and writing quality is so bad ............................................................................................
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ctual rating 4 stars..3 stars I gave cause I didnt like the cliche ****..ie: MC liked someone but didnt confess and when he died the day his love was getting married he went back in time...a garbage cliche idea...but then I read on cause I was bored-its interesting but there is false advertising, MC says he hides abilities but so far he dosnt, dude flat out shoes his genius or at some of his abilities [ex: CHP 12]......its interesting but the romance seems shallow, MC seems to only the chick cause she looks good and the chick only seems to like MC cause he looks good and is smart....so yah..shallow romance....would be nice if its built and the lovers love each other more than anything [say chick is a heiress but she leaves it to be with MC..get what I mean?...i suggest want some fluff.....tierd of the usual **** where MC has to be OP [need to have power, money, etc ]to get the chick....so yah build the romance.Also kudos to author, dudes just dropping **** left and right, updating superfast...nice....anyway GL
First off. Great synopsis, it's really captivating. Your name character 'James' is just wow. I wish I can create a character just like him. Your choice of words is spectacular, what can I say ? I've a lot to learn ?. You're an amazing author. Keep it up Mamacita ?
It's like reading a wet dream. I'm not sure why this is so highly rated. So far basically nothing has happened... So I'll just leave this super low review to counter the super high ones.
This is a comedic masterpiece the characters are well fleshed and well thought out, I highly recommend reading this ________________________
finally a good novel without a system( the countdown doesn't count. ). I was getting sick of all those novels whose only difference is the name.