I'll be replying here because I want others to see this as well. So.I've been like writing my second book, That's HUNTERS ROYALE. and it's way better than this, both in story development and grammar. I hope you guys could give it a try. I want you guys to see this because I've been recruiting readers to my discord as character creators. Yes, it means, you can create a character of your own for my second story, and trust me it's awesome!!. Because you also get to choose the MC side of the antagonist side, and the powers over there are way more different, and yes the MC ain't lame and stupid like the beginner Marcus. ?please give it a try, I believe you guys won't regret it. I hope you meet some of you guys over there.