small pet peave just got to around chapter 100 but she checkes her states like 2 times every chapter and instead of shorting it as the author only wants to shoe one thing they show the whole states I Swear I've seen the status about every chapter and by the time I'm done reading I'll probably have memerized every skill in there. this gets about 5 times more annoying when you use the audio setting on here your sitting there for like 3 minutes listening to the status for the 100th time and as it gets longer I Swear I'm going to spend 15 minutes in class just listening to the status.
Everything except the writing stability is pretty good. Of course, This isn't everybody's cup of tea, it is light-hearted,funny and has an overpowered character making for a laid back novel.Not everybody will like this, But this is just my kind of novel!
Good work. I liked this novel. Keep doing your best.
Not bad, but kinda boring. The MC has yet to encounter any kind of conflict. I mean, there isn't even any face-slapping! The MC "just wants to farm peacefully" and that's exactly what he does.
From the very beginning, the reader can feel that the author has a concept for the whole story! A big plus for that ;) The plot is intriguing, the main character has an interesting, quite violent, personality. ;)Well done!
At first when I started reading this novel, I was going in blind, sort off. Only glossed over the synopsis and was interesting enough so I started to read. I was surprised about the subtle plot twists and turns, it betrayed every expectation I had, truly a nice surprise. What I like most about this novel is the suspension, it really held me on the edge of my seat. The MC is also very smart and calculating, another plus. As I'm writing this review from chapter 42, I'm curious to see how this story develops. Anyways author-san, keep up the good work!
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This novel is just like the others, but different statuses. Honestly, this is just getting tiresome and boring.
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Imma be honest the stories alright, not too shabby but like it could rlly be better. I just think you could do better, so hopefully this review will give you some good ideas, but either way, explain cultivation better, I don't get it too much and it'll really help. give him a more unique character and maybe write a little better. Anyways, thanks for the story!
Very interesting, a third person pov of watching the MC of a xianxia novel and manipulating events to his own advantage, only worrying point is that his progress is too fast, and novels tend to get dropped by the author when he can no longer progress with the story.
Hope author-san can plan his progression so the novel can reach chapters in the triple digits...
Getting better chapters please I need support
Halo reader, i wrote this review after writing 70+ chapters and read hundreds of comments. So here is my honest review on my own work.1. Its a slow start, i know the trending novel are currently a fireworks from the start. OP item or skill, etc. This one is a classic weak to strong novel. Even i dont really like the MC at the start. But i assure you it will change.2. As much as it said historical, its not really true. It based on real world history but its still a fiction novel, so hope you enjoy the alternate earth.3. The world and characters are the one i am confident with. i took a lot of time on them, but you can be the judge of that.4. The grammer and writing stability should improve much from my last novel as i have more experience now. But please be forgiving if there still some mistake, as english is my second language.Please give the novel a try and hope you can enjoy the adventure of Emery and how he became the earth's greatest magus.