PancakesWitchLi

Even though I’m a wow fan, it doesn’t look like to be that good... I might give it a shot later but too much fan fiction. I can’t blame people for being upset over this

Nice job man. Story begins with a battle royale. It's fluent, I did not get lost in battles. I'll add more comments within next chapters but i thought it's deserved a good review even for now. This is the first story which i applied 5starts for all categories. I hope it'll go on like this.