Writing Quality: Good and readable
Updating Stability: Superb and always updated!
Story Development: Nice pacing
Character Design: It's nice and clean
World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.
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Meh novel. The economy and game element makes no sense. Just killing a few locusts and boars at the start already made him earn more than 300 usd.
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Wow. Name changes every chapter. The MC sometimes acts like a transmigrant, sometimes a native. Some sentences wholly make no sense. Translations sucks, and MC doesn’t even know if the original body of his actually committed the crime.
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So this is a good story :)
THE BEST WRITTING STYLE...5/5 rating without a doubt, from the perfect set of words and grammars that form like an array who can easily hooked the minds of the readers,
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They say you’re your own worst critic, so don’t let the authors self review fool you into not reading this. The book is amazing! It’s had me punching the air in glee as Varían (the MC) overcomes challenges and his power growth and struggles feel believable. His interactions with others are funny and engaging, this book isn’t perfect but it’s absolutely deserving of a high review.
I am obviously biased as the author but I believe in my book. Just give it a try, a few minutes of your time is all I ask. Then drop your view on the way out if you're not willing to stay. I appreciate everyone for sticking with me through this trying time.