I think you have a good start, I like the main character. I’m really looking forward to seeing what happens to him. I’m also looking forward to the story picking up and to see how how many wives he ends up with.
Hey potatoes! What happened to the regular updates dude? Its been awhile since the last chapter and i wanna see if crimson mist gets revenge on that baroness and if he can get his little sister in at the sect .. dont chuck it in without a reasonable response atleast, because the story is just getting good .. ** all the best either way my friend you have a talent for story telling and hopefully its still with this storyline thanks again
Should use the punctuations more accurately!
Don’t put the comma like , this.
You should do so like, this.
Other than that, this feels like a good parody work to chill and go through.
Short, funny, and direct chapters about a very powerful MC… This will be very likable to those who like their MC as overpowered as possible
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it's really really good. honestly, the only problem I have is that I'm gonna have to make a billion accounts so that I can get up to date XD
and there is indeed the con of 1 chapter every three days, but at least it's stable on that. rather than maybe early maybe late. anyways, great job author san
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Just some typo mistakes correction ,the story will be more amazing.
English is not my first language, but i understood what you want to deliver .
Keep going, best wishes *****
good story , its wholesome , the mc isnt a beta also there are a lots of spicy scenes the female leads arent annoying however there are a few gramatic problems but thats alright
It's going well, I hope it can grow! ^^
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clueless mc about his powers , the mc has a system and his power as you guess from the title is about speed , sometimes the mc forget some of his skills ch(0-63) thats as far i have gone by the time i posted this review but i will keep reading more and more because i like it , i might not be able to edit or forget to do it in the future , love the world building , characters , writing quality , and the story that is currently progressing
Very good novel so far. .. .. .. .. .. ..
well I am out....too much frustration for me, if the story improves in the future I will read it again I liked the story but the protagonist who had 30 years of experience in business, married and betrayed does not realize when a woman who is in love with him while everyone around her notices her except him.I recommend if you want a rather slow romance story and watch out harem probably Yandere too (I started reading for this tag)