I won't say it's garbage or anything but it's meh. There is extreme nationalism in this novel but nothing too crazy. the quality of trial novels seems to have gone down this week . Usually there is at least 1-2 or two good books in each batch. They should really consider bringing back some of the past novels. They were
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This novel manages to blend a sophisticated narrative style with entertaining dialogue, which is quite the feat. The setting of this story is wonderfully described, and the characters are memorable. Development wise, this story seems to be taking things slowly (very slice of life like), and that's not bad at all. It allows us readers to get familiar with the characters and their world. In short, I'd def recommend this novel if you're interested in a gaming novel. Keep up the good work author :D
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Very good
Story is very iffy in the beginning but the main character develops into somthing better as it goes.
Keep up the good work Author!!!
I dont usually read fantasy books but i was so in intrigued. It is very well written. Well done author i will surely recommend this book to others.
I read this one a few weeks ago but didn't leave a review. I just re-read it and still manages to make me smile. I'm looking forward for the next update.
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the cliches keep comin right after another.. the beginning seemed a little promising with the brothers situations juxtaposed and all.. then it felt like it turned into just the author's self fantasy
definitely a gem of a novel, im so glad that this was in my recommendations!!!! reading that back that sounds kinda sarcastic, but i honestly really love this book so far, more than most ive read. definitely deserves top 20 maybe even top 10 once more chapters start stacking up. i hope you stick with this one author, you could really make a career out of this with how talented you are :)
To many vague cliches, not even a transmigration novel, he murdered originality and simply reused influences from every other copy and paste novel, what angers me even more was that the beginning was decent up until he ruined it with generic garbage.
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