Okay so let me just say this—the shoulder pole scene is absolutely GENIUS. In the original novel, Xie Fangzhu grabs that exact same carrying pole from the corner and smashes it into the protagonist's legs. But here? Shen Yingying sees it, panics, and tries to stop him. And what does he do? He drops it. Because she kisses him. The entire plot pivot hinges on ONE kiss. That's not just a twist, that's a masterclass in subverting expectations. The author took what should have been the climax of violence and turned it into the inciting incident of something entirely different. I literally gasped out loud when the pole hit the floor. And then Shen Yingying's reaction—going from terrified to suddenly realizing she could manipulate him with his own innocence? Chilling. She's not just surviving, she's calculating. The way she uses his own words against him, turning 'shameless' into proof of his repressed desire... that's plot alchemy right there.
"A thrilling novel that blends action and suspense, where characters are thrust into battles with their dark pasts and formidable enemies while uncovering the hidden secrets of the 'Black Chaos' gang. The story showcases an internal conflict between loyalty and betrayal, highlighting character growth in a world filled with challenges and unexpected twists
I haven't read this yet because am waiting for it to have more chapters but 5 stars just because mc is an undead
The author is here! This novel is slightly different because this story is without a system. But very interesting!
From the moment I started reading, I was hooked! I think I'll stick around to see how it goes.
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Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
30 chapters in and i can say i am throughly enjoying it some minor spelling mistakes here and there but overall story and world building is on pointit is your typical regression/revenge vmmorpg story but its actually very well written no excessive info dumping just the right amount to get you to where you need to be the set ups for later chapters are all very well written and the mc is not overly op he just has a slight advantage all in all id suggest a pick up if u like game like stories
Honestly it's so good but my only problem is that the chapters are so short??
I really like this novel its so unlike the usual rebirths author please please update ????
I'm a person of few words, well in this case , letters.i won't say this is peak, i won't say this is top tier.I'll just say, it's good enough "for me".Dawn is not your modern day superhero.
Great stuff, will leave a review again after a few more chapters. Really hope this keeps going, and I saw that this was a WSA2025 entry. Good luck to you <3 <3 <3