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this is very well written the MC is nicely thought out. the other characters don't seem as good you me though. great work though REALLY eager to read more of this!
I never thought I would enjoy a Mafia story but I took a chance on this one . I enjoyed it very much . Well written with twistt and turns. Weak to strong FL.
beautiful ❤️❤️ u are one of my favorite author
This a refreshing take on the cultivation genre, I rarely read anything related to cultivation after starting to read novels in general, but thanks to VeganMaster's fanfics I gave it an honest attempt.I was surprised to find something this good in a genre I seldomly browse thanks to the thousands upon thousands of different ways of face slapping due to a jade beauty friend.Comedy is this novel's bread-and-butter, and it is achieving it through actual funny dialogue, situations, and the overall plot thus far. And the fact that the action is written well and the MC isn't really unbeatable even with his "cheat" in the form of something he achieved in a past life makes it even better. The world-building so far is promising and I am looking forward to a long journey following this novel.My only annoyance thus far is that each chapter feels super short, but considering it's free and has a lot packed in said chapters without drawing things out to go on and on for dozens of them is a bonus that makes up for it. Great one VeganMaster, looking forward to more :)
it was good but only the writing was an issue but all in all it was a great novel.
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??? It is a thrilling ongoing fantasy adventure that a quest through a vividly crafted world. Packed with action, fantasy, and evolving characters, the story keeps readers hooked with each new chapter. It's perfect for fans of epic quests and fantastical adventures eager to see what happens next!?✨?
I like how the FL is portrayed and how she is not always crying about things being unfair. Instead, she is doing something about it on her own
So the MC dies after seeing his GF out with another man. he then proceeds to get OP but remains loyal even when a vampire lady offers herself quoting he has someone to get back to. this tanked the character design for me because he owed that gf nothing. there wasn't enough relationship buildup for me to care, no trials they overcame other than he was lonely. the loyalty he gives her is not warranted. everything else would make this a great story. slight grammar issues but nothing you won't find in other novels.
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Hah, the homework is finally finish. Now, just wait for the bell.