So far its amaizing. Just read 11 chapters and got me hooked up already. In the beginning Im confused about the countries whose enemy whose, maybe you can make a glosary or something. Im also curious how can a metalurgist good at medic and war strategic. Anyway just keep the momentun author, its promising already.
I think that this story is great and should be recognized more for its unique idea. The idea itself is enough for me to give this book a good rating. Other than that I recognized some grammar mistakes but nothing detrimental to the story. I have two reasons for not giving a 5-star review. first, because we have not seen that much yet so I can’t make an accurate decision about the story yet. Second, because it is sometimes hard to track the story as there are lots of short jumps in the writing. Overall, it’s a good book and it deserves my 4 stars.
Ficou muito bom, porém eu acho que ele poderia ter alguma besta divina
Recém-nascido para nutri - la e quando a besta ele/ela crescesse pudesse ajudá-los em sua jornada para o pico do mundo ou do cultivo.
from what I have read the writing quality is good the story is good but having the pay after the 7th chapter pretty much rated as 1 star I would still have payed and read it if it was the 30th chapter
Great novel
I decided to write a review for this just to annoy the sore losers who were rooting for the other novel (the doctor whatever). At first I was voting for that novel but stopped for a deep reason. I didn't like the new cover. It looks like those romantic novels for ***** girls that dream of marrying a handsome doctor, CEO, etc. The cover for this one is way better (since we don't have any way of knowing what those novels up for vote are any good).
Also I checked the first paragraphs of the first chapters and the translation seems pretty good, so unless the quality sudenly dropped afterwards, those complaining about it are just lying.
All the comments about it being hentai, got me interested in it, so I should thank the bad reviews that got me to actually check the novel out. I'm glad I voted for it.
Hi guys, thank you for picking up my book to read, I promise you won't be disappointed, surely as the Author am going to rate my book 5 star.
But this is my second novel and I put a lot of thought into the book before starting it, so feel free to express your thoughts through the comments section. Thanks.
Chinese MHA. Quite a fun trial read considering the garbage that usually pops up on this website. I would give this like a 3.7 but webnovel rounds down so its a 4 now. Anyway, Chinese MHA.
Different but good cultivation novel. Interesting to read and a pretty stable release rate. All in all a good novel :)
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Hoping it gets picked
Translation Quality - 5- because I haven't seen any translation mistakes except with the currency with yuan being used once but apart from that haven't seen anything that needs to be re-read multiple times so far
Stability of Updates is N/A I don't think I need to explain that
Story development -4- It's progressing fairly fast which is something I like so yh
Character Design -4(3.5)- Nothing too out there or new but it's ok so far there really isn't much to say as there is only 15 chapters
World Background -3- Haven't seen any good world-building as of yet it's almost like they're going through different levels in an RPG game but exceptional compared to the other choices
So use this to decide whether you want to read I've kept any spoilers and shi out;any questions just use the comments
After chapter 20 the chapters are not in order. You have to jump around and that only works through chapter 32. After that I gave up trying to figure out what order they were in. I really enjoy everything about this novel but it’s not worth the effort trying to figure out what comes next.
the novel is great, but really a shame that chapter 50 and upward the chapters become pay2read, guess this is the end for me ciao ciao
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