The way in which You portrayed the mc an otaku boy is greatly unique. So far I'm loving this story sooo much. Can't say anything about the Ml tho it's only 3 chps. Eagerly waiting for the story to progress
I really like this book. Well... the plot is very intriguing and the main character is just so very interesting, tho a little bit enigmatic at the beginning. However, the storyline seems nice! Can't wait to see what's going to happen!!!
I only write reviews to novels I really enjoyed. I read about 4-8hours a day and have written about 5 reviews at the span of 2 years of time. Simple said this novel is worth it.Unfortunately criminally few people have read it. The first 3 chapters were cringe and hard to read I had this novel over week on my list, but couldn’t get past the second chapter. After reading past it I couldn’t put my phone down reading all the chapters in one go.GJ author.
You have a plot and direction for your story, author. I salute you for that. You also have a good grasp of how to play with your MC's emotions and ideas. The story is engaging. Your grammar still has room for improvement but you don't have to worry much about it because your sentences flow naturally and it's still easy to follow. I think what you should prioritize for now is the stability of updates and more on world background. Also, work on the punctuations and capitalization. Also break down your paragraphs into more paragraphs. I suggest you always leave the quoted conversations as a line/paragraph of itself. In other words, work on making your paragraphs easier on the eyes. Honestly, some chapters look more like a wall of text to me. And I hate to say this, but many readers dislike wall of texts. XDUhh, no worries. This is all just the technical side. When it comes to content, you're already on the right direction. :-)
You have to pay to see all the chapters that’s just the worst and It is a really good story so far sad I’m going to have to drop it from the 41 chapters onwards you have to gift something if you want to see the full chapter.That just sucks that’s why it’s such a low rating for me if you have the money would recommend but as a brook dude I can’t buy it.
Excellent story! I look forward to the character growth and vivid personalities! If you want a well written apocalyptic BxB or BL etc story then go ahead and pin this to your library!
A great war that swept all the world leaving none from its prying jaws of death... A soldier turned coward who ran away from those horrors for he has seen his loved ones, friends, war mates, his dearest all lost to the cruel war that none experienced and never expected... By a fluke he returned to past which he vowed to protect all those smiles and happiness., this is a story of war hero who's in quest to stop the great war from happening. This is a story that tells us about morality, virtue, cruelty, happiness, sad, a mixture of war and endless court machinations going across the kingdoms courts... A story of betrayal a story of hope a story of enlightenment..... Sigh...... I think I wrote a little tooo much....
Desenvolvimento de personagem é muito bom, o MC é ganancioso e calculista sem ser frio. Gostaria que tivesse maior lançamentos de capítulos.
Why?! Why?! Why?! Are they not continuing it?! Is there no chance it would be continued?! I can't see its translation on other sites, too :( :( Only one ML translation and it's bad, very bad :( Please continue, it is one of the gems :D
I read the previous version of the novel and thought it was great. It's not easy for me to bind myself to a book, but I was fascinated by this story from the start; the characters are well coordinated and the dialogues between them feel lifelike and authentic. The characters themselves also differ from what you see in most books, not for the bad, but for the good, as some characters have disabilities to contend with, thus giving the novel a breath of fresh air.The course of the story is fascinating, combined with good writing quality. I personally recommend the book to readers who like stories about ghosts and how to fight them.
Discovering this novel when it was only about 13 chapters was like finding hidden gems. I haven't read a good novel like this in a long time.Looking at the previous reviews, you will know that world-building is the best thing about this novel. VERY INTERESTING World building, unique and enjoyable to follow, makes you want to know more about that world. Probably the best on this platform, in my opinion. Actually, the terms used are still quite mainstream terms, such as dungeons, orc monsters, churches that govern society, and kingdom themes, just like other novels, but HECK, There is something different about this novel from the others, somehow I feel a very strong medieval atmosphere when reading this like almost the same as our medieval world but with magic in the social. I know the author has done some research to create this from reading this.The plot is very well written, my expectations were low, but the author gave his best in the plot. I even cried in some parts (I'm the type of person who does not cry when reading books). The emotion in this story is amazing. Character development is great!!! And everything made sense to me. The relationships between the characters are amazing. Most importantly, this novel has illustrations that make us understand each character better.Great world building, a good plot, and good characters, and there is something different from other novels in this pf. CONS:grammar issue (minor). The author once said that English is not his first language, and so do I. Although I'm not perfect in grammar, I can tell that some of the author's punctuation and storytelling timing are often not good. But it's still in the acceptable stage for me. It's still an enjoyable read. It's just that, for people who really care (or strict!) about grammar, it's better not to read this, I don't really like it when people give low ratings just because of grammar (I know it is important but this wn is still have good grammar)If this author had a good English editor and improved the writing, this novel might be the best on the platform. Despite the flaws, I still give it full stars because I love this wn so much. Currently, in chapter 45, The complexity of the dungeon, the mysterious girl who makes people suicide, the anti govern, the council, the prince, and the church! The story hooked me.
The most lovable part of this book is the background story of the different characters. The build up is lit. Good job.