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Beautiful story, wonderfully translated but where have the updates gone too? What is going to happen now? I haven't seen an update in around two months.... Please let me know what is happening with this book/story...:(
The title says Utopian but it's a rather dystopian and dark experience. The character has a lot of inner turmoil, and you can feel his struggle, making you root for him. Let's hope he can show everyone who underestimated him, where he really belongs!
A five star rating. Everyone knows what this means. THIS MEANS THE BOOK IS PERFECTO!!!
overall great idea, world is portrayed okay, mostly its just a major flaw with the mc, he's the epitome of a person we all hate.
The long, drawn-out, and dark start effectively drives home the dystopian world, then the rebirth and change happen, and while this is a system novel, it doesn't drown you in stats right off the bat, but slowly eases you into it. The Interesting, well-written concept makes me wonder where it will go from here. Easy to recommend.
great book............................................................................................................................................................
good book ... The author has done the movement of worlds quite well considering the awkwardness or changing and all the worlds so far have been completely original so i think it deserves this good review
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i have absolutely no idea what the heck is happening, but i really like this story.........................................................
so far this story is great, i am already voting for the stability of updates but i ll reserve my final judgment on that point ,i have read in one go the 13 chapters available at that time,the main character seems like a real guys (even if OP in martial arts) the background of the game world is really deep and we discover a part of it in each chapter , it's really a selling point on my part, haven't seems much side character but they seemed realistic so far.really a great start for a story my overall score will be updated (if possible because it's my first review) as long as the quality and the enjoyment are of the same quality as the beginning !really a great work on the author part, thank you!
Easily a 5 star story in my opinion and I love the way it’s going so far and can’t wait for another update. (Now ignore this because it has to be 140 characters)
Okay i am the one person who really loves your work sis, i have been reading your book and you have been updating daily, i see the growth in your characters and how it affects others. Yes despite the few mistakes it is an awesome story.
