Author trying writing an epic but without talent for this.
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This is a potential hidden gem as long as it is not dropped. Doesn't look like a power fantasy of a psychopath like a lot of other novels or boring. Grammer is good characters are well written and story flow is also good.
Hi Mate, first time writing a review. Good reading during my lunch hour. Thanks so much for writing and Gooday. Love you all. Thats my review. Bye.
Whats with the book cover? Are we gonna see A Rory in this story?
Okay, so kinda a weird story.1. Writing style is weird, but unique. Only downfall to it is that there are so much POV changes that you sometimes forget who is talking as the author introduces a lot of characters, but we don't have time to figure out who is who yet.2. Can't really rate this as it is a new novel.3. Story development seems really forced, and the Asomethingsomething for some reason explained everything to the MC instead of just forcing him to become a hitman which just felt really forced and not real.4. Character design is okay, there hasn't been anything unique yet, so a solid 4.5. World background is the best part, as the power system is something I've never seen before. Really awesome.Overall, a good novel.
I decided to write my first review what had all what I think about this novel.
- First of all.... ITS TOOOO SLOW PACED, reminds me about cultivation chat group where basically evry fkng day was mentioned.
- Second of all is that MC loves to do some kind of useless ****. Like well... Talk with trash wich takes him like 10 chapters or more. Or do something really stupid and inconsistent.
- Third is again. MAGIC. How the hell pple lvl up in there? MC basically SOLO cleans whole dungeon and gets most XP posible BUT THERE ARE PLAYERS WITH LVLS HIGHER THAT HIS?! Like wtf?
- Forth is what I mentioned above and more is INFO DUMPS, just one over another. Srsly! I can basically skip entire chapters cause well... Battle wich is not even interesting.
- Fifth is magic PVP masters. Game is basically VRMMO so you have to have ability to move in one way or another. Why the hell there are so much combat masters? Like srsly one over another. With their magic lvl ups.
- Sixth is just story is getting boring. Like wtf? He does one thing like for 4 chapters with tons of tons of info. Also the SHOW BUT NOT TELL makes me rage. He says WOW SO NICE ITEM.... to get in description in like tons of chapters.
- Seventh is that the writes said us that MC is basically 1000y.o cultivator so he has to be like so fkng OP beating evryone easily. But he has to tryhard as it looks like.
- Eight is that how the game works.... Giving and boss with like milion HP? For what goddamn reason? Just to waste another 5 chapters with infodumps all over the places.
- Ninth is that MC loves to waste time on useless ****. He can take a ploblem just for no reason for himself and later give excuse "I wanted to see how to pvp ingame". He just makes stuff difficult for himself for no apparent reason. Sometimes he looks like clever guy.... But a lot of times he does inconsistent ****.
- Tenth is that Enemies that MC meets are over his lvl alwase and the most hatefull are crits. Like why dont you makes One shot abilities? No lets drag the battle for hrs. Why class asassin even exists? Also some class has just insane lvl of difficulty. Like combat master, where somehow you have to make your own skills wich MAGICALLY game can interpret.
I'LL. MIGHT ADD MORE LATER. THE PROGRAM IS LAGGING. NICE OPTIMIZATION LOL.
love it so far ive read up to chap 19 and can see it being a very entertaining story to read. granted you would need to like this stereotype of novel
Very good, I'm looking forward to the next chapters
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Me*reads all chapters released*
*looks over at the clock to see the time*
clock: way too late to be up.
Me: 〣( ºΔº )〣
also me*?@!#*
In all seriousness this is a good story,
The concept of the novel is fairly unique and hasnt been done by many so far. However the intense cringe you get when reading is hard to miss.
The mc is constantly complaining about things and always gives off a winey feel during his monologues. Not to mention the people he interacts with don’t act like normal humans in there situation.
It would be something you could read if your out of options.
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