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I've had time to think about this story, and quite simply it just isn't very good. would you sacrifice almost everything else for :comedic: bits and pieces? (and I say pieces very literally here as most times that's all it is; pieces of)
I see all the reviews about; "don't take it seriously or you won't have fun!" but when the actual story itself brings the reader out of that mindless popcorn fest with its own disregard for even a basic standard of bookkeeping it goes a little beyond the pale.
see, I have no issue 'turning off my brain' if that's the kind of novel it wants to be, but it needs to be very careful with its own internal bookkeeping, so I don't actually have to be worried about it myself. that's the state of play a story like that has to bring to the table.
it has to be consistent, and, ultimately, it has to be largely funny and fun. I, personally, think the story fails to do so, and it's all the worse because of the rest of the issues that fall by the wayside as a result or because of this idea that one doesn't need to care about the rest making sense or working so long as one or two things is done serviceably.
but what do I know, right? 1800+ ratings and a 4.54/5 overall at this moment, it's gotta have something to it, right? maybe you'll see something I didn't, maybe it's just not to my taste, maybe I should ask myself why I pushed so hard to like this story? I read more chapters than I would normally do...
Must say that this book is quite an addiction especially for people who enjoy the action with a nice blend of romance......The ML is determined, devoted, and extremely strong and tries to rise up at the top.
Highly recommended for fantasy and action lovers, the way the author describes the emotions and incidents is just splendid!
Best of luck to both the author and the book.
Wholesome chapters, filled with details as a game should look like. It is as if reading a game script. The author really spent a lot of time and effort on it. I love gaming and so this book gets a 5 star from me. Hope you keep up the good work author-san.
interesting the twist of the antidote being a certain blood type what a mother won't do for there daughter and it's a good thing her mom is agent.
I will give an honest review but will still give it five stars.
This is a cliché novel with a system and also dungeons. If you expect something shocking, at most, you will find some mysteries here.
And if you are looking forward to +18 content, this novel here will have it. I've never written anything of this type before, so I hope to do a good job.
That's it. I hope you enjoy this work, and I intend to continue it for a long time.
Good premise, how ever terrible..... well, everything else. Characters are so 1 dimensional. That everyone that's not on the side of the main character is a bad person.
There's no logic to how the main character gets his rewards, it just shows up, blatant plot armor, which I find is just terrible story telling.
World building is terrible, like it doesn't
tell me if the company that the main character just happens to fall in his lap is suppose to bigger, smaller, or equal to the power of his father/mother-in-law company/family.
Story is terrible written, only a good read if you're in a brainless mood.
"There comes a point where you have to ask yourself how much more of your soul you're willing to let the masses devour. How little remaining self can you learn to live without? Seems like you came here to expand yourself to connect to others, to erase the lines that keep us all separate but they came to tear little pieces off of you and compete over who had the biggest, brightest, prettiest piece. When they are done and they scatter off to the next person they will dismantle you for entertainment, you stand in silence and look at the pieces of you they've ripped away just lying on the ground and they are unrecognizable. They are no longer a part of you. You felt like a cold isolated absence when they've all gone away. It gets lonely so you read the feedback to get closer to them. They all circle around to spit venom about how inadequate you are. You gave them everything, they took it and then they'd decided you are nothing. No individual could devour you whole."
I can only hope this one is different.
The premise sounds very similar to "Scoring Sacred Body from the Get Go" that MC was extremely arrogant and manipulative.
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