The story is still at its infant stage, the characters are still developing. Unlike typical novel where mc starts to take chance or luck encounters of the novel's mc ,the mc is walking his own path. Though not much is introduced in the the initial chapters, the detailed development of mc power is shown.So, I am expecting more from future chapters. I will leave with 5 star for now. Looking fordward to future chapters.
I don't have enough words to express my joy of finding such a unique story. This may also remind you movie 'Dante's Inferno' and seven circles of hell. This one way different other stories about death, underworld, souls, realms, demons, gods and devils. It has mythological references to various cultures. It starts with typical isekai story setting except that most stories I've read in this genre are comedy whereas this one has a darker and negative setting. It then follows with betrayal and our MC's journey through hell, literally. This is where the real story starts.
Totally my style!There aren't that many original novels that include entertainment and a system like yours and mine.I've got to say, it's very interesting.It kinda makes me want to start publishing again..Keep up the good work!
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I don’t know where to start. I guess I should with the most pressing issue, the translation.Review from chapter 39, I’m not a fan.Apparently it was translated by the same people/person that translated ‘The Tycoon God of Online Gaming’. But at least there, it was tolerable. I don’t know if it was the quality of translation or the story, but it might be the latter.Ok, the story. The story is kind of everywhere right now and they don’t go much into detail about the main character and his problems. They only do an overview of it before continuing the story and the bad translations don’t help. They mention other parties but never explain who they are as more parties keep appearing. There are maybe 4-6 different groups of people that are mentioned and I only know stuff about like 2 of them. The other ones seem to be foreshadowing or something but they have only been mentioned once or twice before someone else appears.If you read already I’m talking about the guys who aimed to steal the box, the person who has a boss and the guy who set up the evolution thing and may marry the boss, and the wolves. Those are just some of them.The last one, the wolves are kinda acceptable because it was near the end of the 39 chapters and you get to know a little bit but even then, the author tried to hide every single character behind the scenes with a mysterious mist that ruins the story progression because theres too many of them. It’s also really confusing.And to where the story is headed, not really sure. Just join games and get stronger I’m guessing while all this other stuff happens around him.Ok the writing, as in, the way things play out. Not talking about the story but how fights scenes go and interactions are. They are okay. They may have been slightly changed because of the translations but the humor and the way the main character interacts with other characters and NPCs, is meh.The main characters personality is pretty normal. Oh you want to kill me? Hah! I’ll kill you. Spare you? Nah. He has a hint of arrogance, only a hint, and a lot of energy. Like a stereotypical YouTuber.Basically, I don’t like it, not how the writing goes or the way the author is making things play out. There are certainly others who likes this novel, I’m not one of them.Have a good day, peace.
Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. Though there's some grammatical errors, the flow of the story is good. I wish you the best on your book author ?
Actually fucking garbage. This nigga is stupid as hell and annoying. Peace---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Up to chap 50 in one-night and I gotta say, the novel is great. My favourite after TKA and SAO in regards to games related novels. Recommended?
Na na na na na na na na na na na na na batman! Na na na na na na na na na na na na na batman! Na na na na na na na na na na na na na batman! Na na na na na na na na na na na na na batman! Na na na na na na na na na na na na na batman!
an interesting novel but it should be better to complete it.
IF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT MOUNT TAI ORIGINIF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT WHY CAN'T HUMANS ON EARTH CULTIVATE IF YOU WANT TO FIND OUT ORIGIN OF YELLOW EMPEROR (WELL HALF IS ACCORDING TO AUTHOR HALF CHINESE MYTHOLOGY STILL....ITS AMAZING) ITS AN CULTIVATION NOVEL MC IS GOOD NOT MANY CLICHES WELL 4.6 CAUSE IT WAS ON GRAVITY TALES NOW HERE SO DON'T KNOW THE TRANSLATION QUALITY AND CHP PER WEEK HOPE ITS GOOD
Maybe the story got better after 30 chapters, but I couldn't keep reading. The whole world hates MC for no reason, yet MC somehow doesn't notice it for 15 years. His decisions are super weird. Instead of buying a potion to cure himself of poison, he buys 2 space storages. like WTF is going on?