mc is good because even if it's cliche u gave enough luck and a hidden bloodline and not dumb in his head and also not lustful in nature where he is mature
love love love this novel. super hilarious and filled with funny antics of our little chubby super adorable baby n all characters r too cute in their own way a fav of mine for sure???
I will support this novel from now on. ???It has an amazing message to the humanity.. Quality and worthy of my time.. Thumbs up! XD >???
I guess I will give it a try after some chapters are released I really hope it talks about primordials I hope it won't disappoint me ?hdwhjwkwksjkskwjjwjjejejjsjejejejjejejwjwjwjwjwjejjejejjejejejejejjrjrejjds
This is a very interesting book! The plot so far is pretty engaging, and I like the way you characterized the characters. I would advise checking on the grammar, though; in places it switches between past and present tense. Great work!
Loved the book...looking forward to more chilling Mysteries... My favourite character is Jeff, I thingk his goofiness really gives the book a humourous side, something which most mystery/thriller books struggle to include. Keep Up!!
I love this book so much!!! 100/10 would recommend. I love the plot and character development. I totally think you should most definitely keep going with this. You're my favorite author by far!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hi all. Writer here. Shamelessly out rating 5 for my work. Any feedback are welcome as this is my first time writing and english is not my first language. Expected there will be a lot of grammar error.
This story is very good. I like the character inside, I like the plot, I like the setting, I like all the things inside of the story. So for the author, I hope you can increase your daily update, jia you ???
Hi. As for the review you asked.First, I absolutely loathe the whole ‘level up/stats' thing. When I found out your novel was following this path, it disappointed me a lot. But it’s my preference, and not a problem on how you write it. I decided not to read after reaching chapter 8.You write very well and I hope you know it. It’s fluid and coherent, so I feel I have little to review on this part.Now, about the plot. It’s intriguing to a certain extent, but perhaps a bit tiresome. A reader needs ups and downs to breath. But the first 8 chapters are a lot of ups. Keeping readers on their toes for a long made them mentally tired. And perhaps they don’t return to your book because it makes them holding their breath for too much time. It’d be good to intertwine with some humor or whatever.From what I read, there are two points that bothered me a bit, but after start reading chapter 8, I think only one is really important to mention. The first chapter.It’s not interesting nor made me thirsty for more. I found the part about the aboriginal tribe a better enticing introduction that the glimpse of future in the first chapter. I advise you to check with other readers their opinion about it as well. First chapters are crucial for getting readers.Anyway, your book is not everyone’s cup of tea, but is fairly well written and I wish you success.
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Lovely written. Amazing plot.great story and strong FL.rollercoaster ride for emotions.