REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGEI am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) ?
At first I was confused because this isn't really my type of genre. But I can very much say I don't regret it. As I read into more chapters, I ended up loving each one and every one. I can't wait for the next update!!!!
If you are looking for something fun and a lot of kickarse action this one is def where you need to go to looking cause seriously one of the best villain stories period! I would look no further because you ain't gonna find anything this good elsewhere! ;3
This is first time writing a novel so I am wishing myself luck by giving 5 star. I have no experience in writing so there may be lot of grammatical mistake. If you don't like any part of the novel you can comment what you didn't like. I will surely try my best to improve myself with time hearing your comments
if i hoestly have to say anything, its the fact that the test to get into the military was waaaaaaaaaay to drawn out. i like the details, but i feel there are certain things that are focused on to much (ie, some of the notifications from the system are to unnecessarily focused on), especially with the word count per chapter. the chapters are quite short, and a lot of them go into explaining small details, rather than focusing on the main story. i know a lot of people enjoy slow paced novels, and there was a lot of information being divulged, but the entrance test for the military was from chapter 77 to 219 of (from what ive picked up) was only 15ish days long in the story. im not saying thats bad, certain people enjoy the focus on all the minute details, but frankly, it feels like there was a lot of filler, and repeated information. idrc about the characters traits, as those are bound to change with time, and i like to see the end result, but i feel like it would take to much time with that kind of pace. Im not meaning to dog or anything, im just saying theres a lot of filler and repeat information. and unless the pace of the story picks up, theres bound to be a lot of dissatisfaction arrising over time. i havent read past 219, and as i said, there was a lot of information to process, but the fact that its over 200 chapters, and we havent made it off the base planet, is a buzzkill for me so imma just drop it. i hope you still keep going with it, and wish you luck, but as much patience as id like to believe i have, thats way to slow paced for me.
Intriguing VR challenge. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more.
First off, I'm finally dropping this novel because this chapter ends with the second time the MC gets sucked into a spatial crack and separated from everyone.That's not to say that that's not the only bad thing about it. It has more plotholes than it has... anything else, really. The biggest one is obviously the MC. He could literally have all types of beasts (or even unlimited, dunno what the author plans to keep, the type limitation mentioned in the beginning or the unlimited version shown by the memory fragment simulation), but no, somehow a handful of strong-ish beasts is better than thousands of average ones.Then there are the knowledge gaps. At the beginning, no one knows about the human/demon deal, until they magically do. Same with the continents, no one seems to know his original continent, until they magically all do.Then there's the current big bad in an undersea castle, who can apparently divine any and all information it wants, including the location of the MC's group, but for some reason doesn't just send people to either capture or kill them.Seriously, the whole story is riddled with plotholes and sidetracking.
This has potential, I love the plot, the characters, the scenes. I hope there will be more adversary as well as friends who will join the mc on his journey.
this is the best cover art I have ever seen! 10/10.........................................................................................
It is really a good Book but i dropped it very fast at chapter 70 because the MC always had smth witch made him unique but in chapter 70 he wasn't anymore and this dissapointed me a lot .It is like a Person reincarnateds with a system but every person he wants to gets the same system and same Powers it just doen't make the MC Unique....more simpe and normal and that is what i can't accept.The Story and grammar and everything is really good but i can't accept it.But for every other person on here pls go read this and enjoy because it is really good.I would even think about donating smth to this story because i really like it but ......Chapter 70 destroyed all my Fun. And the worst part it that if i love a story like this is that i always imagine to be the MC so when he is happy i am kindy happy too and when he is say i am as well. But when in CH 70 he got in my eyes " Normal" and that totally destroyed my mood for the day ;(If he gave them the talent to reach the power of Light and Darkness ....OKAY But he should always be stronger or it isn't interesting anymore or not for me.Imagine Ultimate scheming system where all his wives always have the same Cultivation like him Blank.That's the same here.Before he was destined to be the TOP ALONE but not not.It is like you are born the be the Emperor but then they say there have to be 10 Emperors with the same Power ????? Blank right OK srry got off the point a bit.What i want to say for me it got off the path and it isn't smth i get myself to read but it is really a highty quality Novel and i think you should read it if you don't mind what i wrote before .**: Author don't take it personally because i think you are doing great ;)
A very nice book, sometimes there are some strange translations or missing words. But the story is good to read.
great chapter keep them coming well that's all i wanted its forcing me to use 150 characters so gooooooooooooooood job and hope to see more soon