I really like the story so far. The characters are also pretty good. I really like stories that have a lot of strategy in them so I'm exicted to see how that will play out in this story. The only problem I have is how small the stakes are for the MC. Becoming the student council president isn't a huge goal. If however he was doing with real life impact, I think it would be a lot more fun.
Marvelous, the world is beautifully built and the story progression is natural as if you are the character in the story. I hope to read more of this.
Hey author, please stop skipping time. I'm getting stupid just by reading. Plus could you write the tiers or stage of cultivation in a way we can understand Thank love you
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well the novel is not too bad, the only issue is the details. a manga reader must have at least come in contact with a single system novel. its hard to have him ask questions like that.anyways its not a totally bad read, it has its upsides some of which will be realized later on into the book
The plot so far is going well! There are mysteries, lucky encounter and hardworking-protagonist vibe and other possible developments I hope it remains that way and there is no unnecessary plot drags later. Giving some power stones.
mc is a wonderful, smart and evil character. The beginning of the story is wonderful. I hope it continues and does not leave the novel. Continue and do not lose hope. 100 chapters are just the beginning. Many followers who love evil deeds will come in the future. Good luck.
This is one of the few books I like. It's part of the life simulation group if you know that genre but it's pretty good compared to others.
a novel worthy of picking up as a reader i always look for the new chapter to be released. don't let this one past's you by. MC come's to a new world of martial art and find he has a family to protect and as with all great MC when he rise so dose his followers. this world is giant and and MC is OP but this new world sect are are strong and make for a grand game how will be top dog.
Great story, glad I clicked it, no over board drama and weird guy grinding points from s*x, the system isn't annoying but actually helps him in his daily life. The MC personality is kind, calm, and collective but has his issue here and there, he is not perfect. The girls and other characters are so open-minded and not annoying like other novels.Overall, the story is my cup of tea.(sorry if I have grammar and spelling mistakes, English is my second language)
Really cool story. Keep updating more please.Really cool story. Keep updating more please.Really cool story. Keep updating more please.Really cool story. Keep updating more please.Really cool story. Keep updating more please.Really cool story. Keep updating more please.
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