Very interesting I must say, it's not easy to write fiction. The author is very creative and imaginative. I look forward to reading more !!!
Autor here,I don't think I can fairly rate my novel so ill just tell you a little about it. it is an MMORPG novel set in the world of RSSG, I wrote this because of my love for said novel. The novel might be a little confusing if you haven't read RSSG but I'm pretty sure it is still readable. hope you guys enjoy.
Not your cup of tea if you just want to relax and enjoy simple daily chapters. Different from stereotypical web novels that always repeats the same cliches. While intelligent MCs aren’t that rare anymore. This novel is one of the few that manages to have a large part of the story dedicated to the MC’s thinking while keeping it simple to understand, and still draw readers in. The MC isn’t a super intelligent genius who can figure out an enemy’s entire life story just from a single glance. The MC’s more of a regular person, who slowly acquired various skills while doing his best to stay alive in a crime infested city. He does his best with what he has.Only issue I have is the occasional translation mistake. Like the monster that’s a giant mouth with legs, which is a grinner. Being renamed to “joker” for an entire chapter for no reason.
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Title: Truth of Magic/法术真理Chapters: 540(ongoing)Author's no of work: 1Start Date: 2020/01ExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExpExp
I like this one, is funny and interesting. Hopefully this gets picked.Some text to reach limit.??????????????? ??????
Here is the link to the Cultivation Level Comparison Chart between Renegade Immortal, PoT, ISSTH. https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1dSvWxSdVUVGW1ilr-nUet4iMaAxbATkkEMIbzPEAyec/edit?usp=sharing
In my opinion, if the translation and updates section were removed, this story would only get a 3.0 rating.Why?Well, for starters, although the world background looks well thought out, it isn't that great, in my opinion - at least at the beginning, since we don't know much about the wider scope. All we know is the sect - I mean, come on, at least tell us what's beyond the sect and it's scope of influence at the beginning, so we know what we're dealing with and how much to sympathize with the travel and influence systems of the MC's world.Next, let's take a look at character design. All I have to say for this is that there's nothing riveting about the character design. Also, I have a hundred different impressions of the MC because of this storytelling.Speaking of which, the storytelling. I have to say, the plot idea of the author was amazing, but his storytelling was not quite up to mark. He seems to be trying to speed up and breeze through everything, but if you're gonna explain, try and explain everything.Also, if you read my books and think I'm a hypocrite, you're free to think so - it's because I contracted Author's Disease - the disease where suddenly every book other than yours is more interesting to you, so you read them and don't write yours.
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There are a lot of these sign in novels lately ?? . ... . .
A very interesting novel but as many have pointed out the grammatical errors are really annoying.Pls fix them asap atleast the first 30 chaps else it'll be a shame if this gem doesn't get recognition because of this simple mistake
Overall a pretty solid start to a novel. After reading the free chapters I can say it has set the stage excellently for a slow slice of life with a twist. The characters are realistic with quirks but not becoming stereotypes of caricatures . As for complaints its mostly minor things, there's rare but significant translation hiccups, the setting is mostly pretty uninspired, and there's only a limited number of chapters available currently. Otherwise the pacing is a little slow, and the MC does have a "system" of sorts which may be off putting to some.