Then he put 42SP to Chop and 28 SP to Sneak.
"What do you think you doing!!" Chinhwa glared at Sarang the coldness vibrating from him.
Naruto, for his part, was now in a melee with the largest penguin in the group, who didn't talk, but had this strange staff that he was trying to stab Naruto with. It was orange and on the tip was a seal that glowed blue with chakra. What is that? Does it have chakra? It feels like it has chakra in it. Why does it feel so familiar?
The storyline seemed promising at first glance, but it quickly devolved into a convoluted mess of clichés and predictable plot twists. The characters lacked depth and development, making it impossible
This novel is truly awesome.It is very hard to write something around a topic as abstract as feelings, but I have to say that the author has done a very great job depecting it in this novel.I sincerely recommend this novel to anyone out there intrested in psychological and emotional story
Chrysalis is a story about a human transforming into an ant monster in a world where every living creature has access to the System. Writing Quality - There is little repetition that I noticed, which is an unfortunately common affliction among many of the novels on this site. It is easy to read and understand without seeming underdeveloped or basic. This is what should be the baseline for all the novels on this site to reach.Stability of Updates - I binged the whole story over the course of 2 days so I cannot comment on stability. I have seen a few apologies by the author for being late occasionally, but the overall reader reaction is positive in this regard. Story Development - At the time of this review, there are 446 chapters released. The story is fine. Anthony, a newly reborn ant monster, is sent out into the massive Dungeon and he wants to uncover why he was summoned and who is Gandalf (the name he gives the System), all the while undergoing adventures and meeting new people and monsters, and sometimes eating them. It has good pacing with lots of room left for new interesting events to occur. Character Design - The Protagonist is the weakest link in this story. Put frankly, he constantly acts in a manner which infuriated me and a number of other readers by making stupid choices that a normal person wouldn’t make. I believe this is deliberate on the author’s part as it happens a lot but always seems to work out in the main cast’s favor in the end. Some wasted potential comes in the form of the main character’s backstory as a human. In order to keep this review spoiler free I will refrain from talking about it directly, but every time it appears I feel disappointed.The other characters are better and far more interesting, if a bit cliché. I wish more time would be spent on them, but I also know that a similar web novel Kumo Desu Ga, Nani Ka? does just that and I can understand if the author wishes to be distinct from it. World Background - The world building is where this story shines. At the start of many chapters, the author will give a snippet from some in-universe books which gives the reader some insight into the world of Pangera and those who live in it. The setting feels more lived in and real than most other #system novels that I have read and the protagonist is less of a prophesied hero and more like just another person in this world. Very Good.Overall - if you are interested in something to pass the time in an enjoyable manner without having to pay ridiculous premium costs, then I can recommend this novel wholeheartedly. Finally, 8 legs are better than 6.Fight me.
Always a great read, enjoy realm hoping and ever evolving plot line. Only negative is the 4th walk crashing author haha and the dumb fairy. But has great plot and great character's
Although there are a few contradictions in the background building, it's still a good story, that's got good potential. I hope author can make it a serious and durable project qith the help of editor-sensei. ** : I support the book
Disgusting typical Chinese faceslapping Wuxia novel.I mean, what did you expect?It has subpar translations, which just makes the novel that much worse than it already is.
Cool story.
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