It's a good story with a great potential. The mistake like grammar and typo is also really unnoticable. The world background is also a bit of a fresh air, especially with many cultivation novel around here. The pacing is kinda slow (at least for me) but it doesnt feels like filler yet. I do have concern about the attitude of the MC and the name of the system thoughTo be honest I try to read this novel after sering kingdom building in the title. But as the story progress I realize that the subject of the MC are probably those girls that comes from gacha and nothing more (at least until chapter 41) . That limits the number of the subject, so to be honest I kinda dissapointed. Moreover, as the story goes I also feels kinda frustrated with MC behaviour. Again I come here expecting some kind of faction building, so I expect the protagonist have some quality of a leader, but I am disappointed. The proeels like a door mat, (at least as far as chapter 41) especially the scene where he gives many equipment but got nothing, even up until that point, she still doesnt trust him. To be honest, he is really not a good leader material, I'm confused how he even got that system. With honesty over the top that question whether he is jp protag, to some kind of naive personality by trusting other people too easily. But overall it's somewhat ejoyable story
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I Really love it, continue writing this novel please ♥, but there is a lot of things that I don't really understand but it's ok------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is pretty goodWell, it has a swallow title, but so far, I love author`s way of story telling, and I love this novel power couple, and I love how the story develop so far. This novel`s rating is too low, and I think it deserve some more higher ratingFor all the newbie reader, I recommend this novel, because despite the slow story development, and the slow romance, this novel has a quite solid foundation. Happy reading, and have a nice day
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this book deserves more of a following is great amazing realistic sad depressing but amazing and awesome.....................................heh didn't think i could make 2 on the Same book
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Our time will come, comrade, please continue itWe Vietnamese will always stand side by side with the Soviet comrades. Victory belongs to us
We live in a society, and if you say to someone : an animal .. He will get angry, and if you say to him his a lion will rejoice. It seems that the lion is a type of fruit ..
The story was decent except for grammar issues, using the wrong names and/or swapping between two names for the same person. My biggest complaint though is the sudden ending. Took one chapter to creat an ending and left tons of story gaps.
name mix ups an Grammer errors , other than that a great read
This really good so far, even though it's only one chapter. If author write the he or she did in the first chapter, I ready for some more. It's interesting, is it the same as Lord of the Dao.