The Hero of Misery

Not very clear definition on stages of genes, weapon and cultivation realm. Really hard to understand certain notes and points. Too rushed for a good novel.

I really want to like the novel, but story has one huge problem. Arman. I have read till c100 and after they leave the first island, story slowly starts to convert into Arman's story, especially after they leave for human lands.After they arrive to the city mc basically becomes nothing more than side character, we follow Arman's stupid and annoying shenanigans, Arman is one doing the talking, Arman is one starting the fights.Mc's role on other hand is pretty much to stay in background, pay, guard and be an nanny for Armand. Mc really only gets some time on the story when there are enough problems and he much come in to clean the mess. Idk, I just expected story to be about mc, not Arman. Besides, Arman is constructed like stereotypical "comedy" side kick, comedy meaning he's just super annoying.

We really need mooaaaaaaarr of this please do something we can't even vote for it because it is not the editor's choice what can we do to continue reading this?????We need moaar sectMoarMoaarMoaaarMOAAAAAAAR

Pretty good so far. Writing quality is very good; I did not notice any mistakes. The MC seems quite interesting, and it compels the reader to want to read more. Keep on writing author; you're doing good!

OK I like this book I do first the most glaring yet smallest problem :English you need to go back and edit your work you are improving clearly but the early chapters were so atrocious I almost gave upSecond it's been less then a month that's not as much time as you seem to think people have to kill hundreds if monsters a day to reach that lvl you would have to spend zero time looking only one fight after the next never taking more then a minute it's so stupid and then it's repeated by many people let's be consultative and say 100 have level 20 by chapter 50 three or so weeks in 15-16000 monsters killed meanin a million or so monsters in month in an unknown environment with bodies that are contantly changing I mean if you are five times stronger you would have to learn to walk again after all its not a gradual change so martial arts would have to be relearned over and over muscle memory would be completely useless because you'd need a different amount of strength for the same result maning your muscle mom or would have to adapt with every level that would mean many hours of practice for monthsThird  pacing 10 or so chaps of hunting rabbits then he gets dragon blood meets a weird monster and gets the love intrest I know there is a narrative reason for that but that doesn't make it an any worse a choice from a writers perspective spread those events out with the monetonous grinding chapters So chapter 55 the Mc let's himself be surrounded instead of idk moving attacking talking strip down kissing his own ass good bye literally anything.this is not the onlytime he is stupid The final problem I have with is with 55 specifically the Mc is bound by rope tied to a stone have you ever used this wepon seen it used in real life anything I thought no because if you had you would relize there is no reason for that rope to stay wrapped around his leg the most you could is a stumble before it just before it just gets pulled back it's like binding some one with an untied rope it makes no senceI liked that you are trying focus on the people a bit not a harem also a positive trying to focus on her personality your English is improving I'm not as good about saying positive stuff I wasn't trying to be vitriolic in this review an hope I wasn't to rambaley and incoherent

Loved this chapter, got to see my boy zero have a little more screen time and also learn that not everyone is a hero for the same reason, also can't wait to see how aqua reacts when she goes to the realm of gods. ?????