rathan
I don't think there are enough boy love stories on this site. So I'm adding one! I like the story, maybe you will too. This is bl, MxM, danmei, slash so be warned. I don't plan on explicit *** scenes though. But the guys date and kiss and what not. If you don't like that please don't read. Thanks!
Is this book up?its good ...................................................................................................................
I think they got the test list wrong..............................................................................................................................................................................................
This novel is one of best in trail .. it's storyline is great and unique. No matter old or new reader you must give it a try.
excellent
It's not an easy case. An imbalance between gameplay and character world. I like the gameplay. I don't like reading about events outside the system.
Great pace and character building. It is a cliche story, but written well. It has a typical start: retunrning to past after being dumped,but in this story it represents the previous life of the mc and building his character.So 10/10
Action packed fights, intense training scenes, and interesting cultivation methods, are all things you won't find in this story. The translation itself is a slog to read through, partially due to the overly flowery language and content of the source material. So far 47 ch in, there has been many more pgs dedicated to poetry that doesn't translate well, or at least hasn't been, than pgs of fighting, cultivating, and learning combined. I feel like author is trying to show off how cultured he is. The fights are very bland as far as I can interpret from the confusing translation. Mc suddenly get good at techniques without any on screen training or exploration of the technique itself. This does have some potential, Mc is interestingat least, but potential was squandered by poor translating and writing.
Thanks for the original and the one who started the translation of this great novel. If you want to know that this novel is good ..... well go read the review in novelupdate and decide by yourself. BTW why this novel posted in qidian ? as far as I know this novel should be the right of wuxiaworld, right ? sorry for my ignorance because I do not see any statement from Ren (Wuxiaworld)
Aaron is a cool character. Love the way this was more of a psychological story rather than the run-of-the-mill stories that normally are on here.
I haven't finished it all yet, but wow! the dark side is part of the reality we live in, the main characters are so relatable, this is a must-read, you are a talented author, keep it up!
Nice story!!!!Pls continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
