Naruto: Broken Pieces

There are frequent grammatical and spelling errors throughout the book, however that isn't the worst part. After chapter 133 or so it drastically changes the story. Instead of fang Chen we get Jian. instead of the martial spirits cultivation system, we get the usual core formation and nascent soul cultivation system. It's like the author accidentally switched up projects and pasted the wrong book.

what a nice beginning I hope you can continue it it would be a shame to stop and I would like to see where this is going...…………………………………………………………………...

Our time will come, comrade, please continue itWe Vietnamese will always stand side by side with the Soviet comrades.  Victory belongs to us

I loved the suspense the author has created in her book....its very well described and the plot is so thickening and author has the ability to catch the readers attention through her writing...good job!

La historia puede empezar un poco lenta y desconocida ya que siempre trato de leer fanfic pero es un historia interesante que cada día va mejorando y lo mejor hasta el día de hoy no se si donde llegara eso es lo bueno de una historia original nunca se sabe que tendrá

the urban ambience is quite strong in the beginning. then snap, it changes into the fantasy realm, beyond imagination.the narration is very good, rich, and the dialogue flows smoothly.break a leg for the wsa participation. good luck for you, author.