That‘s is a nice story in the making.
It will need some editing bc of some lost words and the other normal little prob‘s, but it’s a good read nonetheless.
1273, I'll be stopping at this chapter, I really tried to ignore the plot holes but this was the last straw, I already have to read this sh*tty translation, I'm grateful that they translated all the chapters, but my god look at this rubbish translation, it seems like all the sites after chapter 448 the translation was written with feet. To be honest I was really just reading this for the harem, because there isn't a cool fight scene in it, "Chen xiang takes out a dragon slaying sword and uses it with the Demon Suppressing Palm 10 power" and the other guy goes to hell, mc He has divine yin yang talent, but all other characters can keep up with him at least in terms of cultivation, just with pills that the MC gives from time to time and training from the sect.
This have hundreds of chaps on the other sites. Quite a good read.
The sheer amount of dumb and contradiction by chapter 8 just made it to much. I bet it gets better down the line but what happens around ch8 makes me wana make a face like the one they did in "soul eater" Whenever excalibur got mentioned
i agree with this which is the one of the main reasons i didnt get through even ch46 lol, could not hold my attention cuz i was confused a lot of the time
Has this novel been dropped?
I know the Hermes system and this novel are in the same universe because of the running god being chased by Death that Riely found was in the other book.
So his newer novels might be connected to these works but not important to the story, more like a cameo or something.
It would be kind of funny if at the end of one of the new novels the big bad fight is interrupted by one of Riley's kids and just obliterate everything and then leave, it couldnt be riley because they wouldnt know how they died having their planet being hit by another planet.
It makes so little sense so far... I'm having rather extreme trouble actually wanting to continue as early as chapter 10. I usually give a story until 50 just in case only the start is bad. But this one makes zero sense at all.This feels more like a spitballing attempt at a story than any kind of actual outline. And all the 'answers' seem to be as vague as they can possibly be. Which makes me feel like the author has no freaking clue where they're trying to go with it.
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already know this novel is destined for greatness. looking foward to how it plays out in the future!
i really love this story. i always re read it sometimes. and i can't still get enough. GoodBless to the Author. Thank You for writing us a very good story.
This fanfic is pretty good, I have noticed zero problems with it so far and I am enjoying it. The story also offers a refreshing new look with a focus on things other than konohagakure