It’s a good book, I would like it to have some more talk about what is going on. And also about the fighting. I would say this book is in my taste.
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I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail.
Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters.
I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building.
The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand.
Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional.
I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine.
I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem!
I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
Nice story line keep up the good work author and I will recommend this to everyone who has been in this category for the next face-slapping chapters..
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he's first described to be calculative and apathetic with the exception of his first love. Now its seems like he lacks IQ and is way too immature. he sounds more like a rich brat than a killer whose suffered 7 years.
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Really good. I just started it and it's really engaging and fleshed out well! I have two complaints, 1 the occasional grammar/spelling error which is totally fine and easy to ignore, and the fact that the ranking goes SS-S-A-M-D-F. Why is there an M??? LOL, but I really enjoy the story, would highly recommend.