As stated by a comment above, this novel already has over thousands of chapters and is definitely not worth time translating nor reading....
A novel for a true pussy, for a true wuss. The MC can not even be considered to be a man. Damn, the plot is good but why make the MC like that?
A cock-tease and a pussy.
Nice writing by the way but wrong character development. Making an R-18 novel and perverted MC with no dick.
The story had a very good start, there were some chapters which had me worried for the development of the stories, like in first town and casual day. I wont comment on grammar as i focus more on other aspects of story. the author already laid a groundwork for a good world so he should keep in mind of that. I would remind the author not to go in the direction of know it all and clever type MC without laying groundwork to make believe. If harem or romance then should have a good development like in some love at first sight. The villains and competitors should also not be some fools and should have some character.
The author should not be discouraged by some comments but rather strive to improve his quality, I believe this story has a chance for good development.
I think this story has a lot of ponteual but personally its not my cup of tea!!! Im not saying its bad but i fell like its moving a little to fast and that theirs a lot of info missing that could have ben more helpful if placed in the right parts! LET ME SAY THIS I WOULD HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TGIS STORY TO FREINDS its just not for me!!! So keep at it i cant wait for the finale results!
What the **** !?!! Our mc is none other than a middle aged next door otaku uncle !?!! And lolis too!!!! Why am I finding this uncle a little untrustworthy.. ????????
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Pretty good so far, but there is only three chapters at the time of this review. Sooooooooooo, it might get a little outdated. Could get better could get worse, only time can tell.
This is a nice eastern fantasy story! I recommend it! I’ve never touched eastern fantasy story with male as the MC before, but this is quite refreshing. The beginning has already piqued my curiosity. Writing style wise, I won’t argue much abt the grammar although yes I think there’s a room for improvement. The plot itself is exciting. What I love the most is the character building bcos the author takes their time in building the characters. I can see the distinct personalities between them. And finally, it’s so refreshing to see such a nice family like Qin. I hv enough of my share with evil sisters and concubine. Thank you.Anyway, keep up the good work author! ?
I love the book and the mc who just keeps slapping faces, more grease to your elbow, i hope to read more chapters soon????????????????????????
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.