Oh boy, another cool story about necromancy. I sure hope the MC never ditches his skeletons entirely and becomes a melee combatant. Oh wait, that's exactly what happens. Very disappointing.
Just a MTL.
Why even put it here.
It is hard to understand. World background is not clear. Character is not clearly defined. Nothing is good in this novel.
Too much cringe, too much formal words. Not my cup of tea ☕.
The plot is very predictable. mc says only power is important in this world, but he himself is stupid, naive, does not build logic. He should use his brain and not make unnecessary enemies, but he acts without thinking. The system is in the hands of the wrong person again :D
Its.... the characters have 0 personality, was expecting at least something considering this is a romance you know??mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm?mmmmmmmmmmmm
Compared to True Martial World's translator, the translator of this novel is way too greedy. While comparing their translations on both novels, the translations on this novel is subpar with a lot of grammatical errors. If you're going to compare it to TMW's smooth translation and not google translated which you can read from 7-11 spirit stones per chapter and unlocks after a week or so where you can read it for free, this novel's beyond compare and beyond redemption. Though a lot of people are still reading this novel (well, me included) this novel is becoming like those novel that are being dragged too much to become a milking machine for the author/ttanslator. 1.1k plus chapters and the protaginist is still a weakling. And the stroy being too much of a repetition. That's a hell of snail paced and over hyped and mainstream chinese novel for you.
Mc doesn't act like an ancestor at all.. He gets flustered so easily by girls, absolute simp
The only reason why this novel has such a bad rating is because the most liked reviews are from 5-6 months ago complaining about unstable release rates and bad translation, which has been great for the past couple of months. Please ignore those reviews and give it a try!
Once you get past the beginning with some great world building which may be somewhat annoying for some of qidians younger readers (<14 years) you will find this story to be one of the best CN novels you've ever read.
It's basically like the beginning of Swallowed Star with sentient beasts and a MUCH superior romance subplot!
Also please do like a bunch of actual reviews so we can finally shove those outdated reviews on top into oblivion!
One of two truly original CN stories I'm aware of. It absolutely should be read once you are jaded veteran, to give you that extra bit of freshness. CNs are highy repetitive, riddled with plot holes and sloppy filler spouting on deadline. Once you truly feel that irritiation of reading same plot devices
for nth time, it's time for Wang Lu, cultivator whose "cheat" actually interferes with cultivation, so he uses his brain intead of his fists. Watch him troll ******ton daoists till they don't know their own names.
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I read the early chapters of this novel a month ago and immediately drawn in. The premise is very promising as it explores humans desire for a second chance after life for their loved ones and themselves. I am so happy Sabet has finally published the story here on Webnovel. I can't wait to keep reading more.
Writing quality = 5 stars. For a newbie author, this is very impressive.
Story development = 5 stars so far. I've read all available chapters and really like how it's progressing. We get information on the game slowly but in a good pace with enough mystery to keep us guessing. Good flow and pacing.
Character design = 5 stars for now. Only saw a few characters so far but they are well thought lot and relatable.
Updating stability = 5 stars. One chapter per day now, though I predict it's going to be more once the book is contracted.
World background = solid five stars for the one I've seen so far. Can't wait to read more.
Broken VR Game (the balance, programming, and hardware are all poorly done) + unnecessary (RE:) Time Travel. Then he jumps back into the machine that killed him. I've heard "The MC's actions were unrealistic" before, but I'm not going to read about the multi-Darwin-Award winner. The only reason I flipped through the first few chapters, was that I thought it was Portal Fiction. It's not.