The novel is unfinished and at this point, I don't think it'll be finished.
The story was decent but nothing amazing.
Personally, I wouldn't spend my coins on this story.
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This is a great book but needs a translator to get rid of the rough edges but other than that great story if you like sci-fi and other such storys
Its a good story. I personally like the gamer and the MCs stories the most. All the other plots seem to be pushing LGBT views down my throat though. Like one story arc happens then we switch over to the MC and get his take on the surprise reveal of the gay couple and the trans person. Where he plays the straight white male, and then all of a sudden his female assistant (which was purposely made to be more competent than him) starts making excuses for her candidates. Ending with the MC being subtly manipulate into changing his straight views on the sexes and into this female leads more gender neutral ones. At this point I dropped the story. I didn't want to read something where there isn't a single person I can relate to. And that the only straight male (MC), was only created to play the fool in this story. The constant POV switches didn't help either.
It was a confident novel and a very confiding one. It's a new genre and has a different style of manuscript and appears like the novelist is obvious about it. Keep it up!
It's really great
This is worse than terrible. There is no point to the story almost all the way up to twenty chapters. User unnecessarily writes about a great many scenes in many countries with no purpose what so ever. The government scenes are supposed to add a great twist, but all they ever do is increase speed by a little.
It's like author imagines him self writing a master piece by borrowing many cliches. At the end of the day, result achieved is a thousand unrelated little pieces scattered all over resembling trash.
I'm on the 4th chapter and just felt the need to say this. I LOVE IT!❤ You have writing skills and the story itself is compelling to me
good
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"Whoah" Is my first reaction after reading the first few sentence. The writing quality is really good. I am looking forward to the adventure and how MC will become powerful in the new world at the future chapters. It also piqued my interest on the part where the old man told him that he can still see them someday.