Everything is good exept the spelling and grammer which could be easily fixed with proofreading. There are also no random buetifull woman that are more beutiful then the last falling in kove with him like in other storys.
Listen I like this type of novel and all, but even the characters' first blueprint was the same... it's just another copy of a popular web novel. listen if you're an author it shouldn't be too hard to just take ideas from the book, but just don't copy it.
Can we just take a moment to appreciate how DISTINCTIVELY each character sounds in this chapter? Because the author has given every person their own voice and I am here for it. Grandma Qin's dialogue is pure old-school refinement. Every sentence is complete, measured, almost formal—but never stiff. "Young lady, do you live around here?" "My husband's surname is Qin. Everyone calls me Grandma Qin, so you can call me that too." "I don't have much to boast about, except that I own quite a few houses." She reveals she's wealthy with the casual grace of someone who's never needed to prove anything. And that WeChat name—just "Grandma Qin." Four characters. No flower emojis, no inspirational quotes, no pretension. The text literally says: "No flowery embellishments, no pretentiousness—just like the woman herself." I love this woman so much already. Then there's Jiang Siya, and her voice is an absolute weapon. "Well, look who's alive. The workaholic isn't pulling overtime today?" "Not going home to wait on that whole family of weirdos anymore?" She fires off lines like she's reloading. But the genius is that her dialogue reveals her care THROUGH the bluntness. When she says "wait on" instead of "cook for," she's forcing Yang Zhiyan to see the power dynamic she's been blind to. And when she describes the dinner they're going to—"expensive, gorgeous, delicious, and looks amazing in photos"—she's not being superficial. She's giving Yang Zhiyan permission to experience something luxurious, something she's never allowed herself. The contrast between Jiang Siya's machine-gun dialogue and her round, dimpled, New Year's doll face is the author's masterstroke. No one could stay angry at her. And honestly? Neither could I. Yang Zhiyan's internal voice is the quietest but the most powerful. She barely speaks out loud in this chapter—most of her dialogue is polite, brief, almost apologetic. But her text messages? Those are where we see her awakening. "I don't want to go back. Today, I want to be a little kinder to myself." Five words that carry three years of suppressed truth. And Jiang Siya's reply—"Well, look who's finally come to her senses"—is teasing but also genuinely proud. The narrative voice itself is worth praising. It moves between external observation and deep internal reflection so seamlessly that you forget you're reading. The line about the sunlight being "like a ribbon of golden silk stretching from her feet all the way to the end of the street" isn't just description—it's the narrator whispering to the reader: something is changing. And the chapter ends not with a bang but with Jiang Siya driving fast and Yang Zhiyan finally, finally letting someone else take the wheel.
The story is truly intriguing band it has great plot. I'm also starting to like Flynn. He seems like he would really be an interesting character to read about
wow this is the good novel i have ever had ... give me it raw name please......................................................................................
Good story. I support you author so pls write the chapters fast. And qidian, seriously you need to remove this annoying restriction of 140 word.
good book update faster . ........ ...........................................,...............................................
How do I say itThe hero is now in the female body The hero will fall in love with a girl or a boyI need to know this before I start reading
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it's good and interesting to read. will be waiting for more update.unless it's discontinued?
According to the four chapters I have read, the story is quite intriguing and interesting. However, It could've been much more better if the author explained things slowly and let the reader understand everything properly. With proper descriptions and depictions of emotions, it could do wonders. To early to say, though.And I must say the novel has a lot of potential if it's done right.
Deserves the high ratings Very much enjoying the development of the MC - he does not start as OP but I feel as the story develops this will change. Like the world setting - would like a summary page where the author can capture all the skills, races etc Would highly recommend reading and beg the author to release more please!