All was good so far at the start but the story contradiction and mc is well the best full of ****.....one of the most craps it ruining the world you writing the story base on and put other world in it to make it more of a ***** crap.....you writing style os good but you brain process for this is story is well not even considerable.....good luck for the future development so you make a good mc and world BASED story to not ruin the world story with crao developments.....